By Gala
Submitted by Galadrial
Date: 2001 Aug 30
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Fire Ring

Tolkien wrote of rings indeed,
and I read his words with the simple pleasure
of a greedy child
so dazzled by hobbits
wizards, and weefolk
that I missed the point
that rings have power.

And when you gave me a ring,
fired not by ice
but the cool warmth of fire opals
glowing like the belly
of a spirit elemental,
I slipped it on my finger
as innocently as Frodo.

And even as it glowed in a box,
it leapt to a flame on my hand
that took my breath
and I would look at it in wonder
while minutes became hours
hours became days
and time did the magick trick
of passing while we looked elsewhere.

I took it off,
but there it stayed for my mind's eye,
gleaming like a bird of paradise.
But I mistook ring for vow.
Symbol yes,
but not promise.
Hope...but just a spoken dream
made real for me
by this glinting ring of flame
that licks at me
at times as pleasure,
at times as pain.

You give what you can,
but how can I say
that I would trade this fire ring forever,
for one touch from your eyes?