By Devin
Submitted by Devin
Date: 2001 Nov 08
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Prefix/Suffix kind of day

Unbelievable
the way she stood in the rain,
indistinguishable,
tear drops,
from rain drops.

Unbelievable
the way her smile turns to frown
I'll get the smile back,
I'll turn her upside down.

Quite remarkable
the changing of her mind
the twinkling of her eye
distant and disguised
seemingly almost blind.

Unforgettable
the history
her story
my story
our story.

Unfathomable
it has come to this
tit for tat
this for that.

Unbelievable
yes,
but doable
truthful
hopeful
love pat.