By Maggie Mink aka Rennie Lorca
Submitted by RennieLorca
Date: 2004 Apr 30
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DRAFT PICK


DRAFT PICK

GAME: who's to blame
time rolls on just the same
freeze frame my feelings again

Life's too tame...tonight's game

a blythe spirit may entertain or
roar over the war of this crowd
--that ƒ(r)!%n' TV's far too loud!

you snore, remember your war
smell of snacks, attacks, score
watching others getting sacked
(a little ambiguity from the sack)
in war paint and favorite colors
(little snide asides while I abide)
remember I'm under the covers
(should I tell others we're lovers)

¿get paddles? shout, "CLEAR!"
what I say, what you hear
hovers in one ear
(touchdown here)...out the other
yes, I still love you, foolish lover

GET YOUR OWN BEER!

(c) 2004 Maggie Mink aka Rennie Lorca