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By Marshall Hann Submitted by blessed23 Date: 2007 Nov 15 Comment on this Work [[2007.11.15.16.04.2035]] |
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Is there someone there for me waiting in the darkness with open arms that hold all the warmth that exists in this naked universe (cold lips kiss in a dream I have when I'm alone) Is there a girl running with dandelion seeds in the wind carelessly searching for me (ME!) and me alone will she be brave and move into me? I'm a blank page, a firefly in the mist, I am Alpha and Omega The first, and the last, My skin is honesty My heart is a centrifuge So when she finds me (I say when not if because I think I would already be dead without this hope however barren and disparate it may be) Will she understand that which is I? Okay, so i wrote this and normally when i write i'm pretty much satisfied with it as soon as i write the last line. not so much with this one, quite a few things i'm thinking of changing, or taking out or rearranging. thoughts are appreciated though not mandatory. |