By distant moon
Date: 2008 Aug 29
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[[2008.08.29.01.05.2346]]

Oops

I submitted a poem twice...so...i'll just edit and write something else... ;-)

when leaving home
on a long and fruitful highway
addressing problems the only way you can
it's a disturbance, for everyone

understand
I am not demanding love here
just a simple friendly gaze
a superficial maze is what has risen
in place of the former prison
that occupied this space

so don't assume
i'm in the room
contemplating the reasons too