By JOYCE
Date: 2009 Mar 15
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Fantasy Island

The song says you're a rock
it says you're an island
and that sounds rather harsh to me.
All that stone and shale makes you sound quite cold
and not appealing at all.

If you're going to be an island -
do I have to swim a vast ocean to find you ?

Perhaps you're a "Fantasy" island ?

Now that would make all those breast-strokes worthwhile.

Maybe you need to create a new ad
and defnitely drop the rocky part.  
Coal mining is not anyone's idea of Love.