By Mad Max
Date: 5 January 2001

A lover's critique of video sent...

A prose of contents found within...
Your video arrived the other day my love, and upon reviewing these are the things I find I love...
The way you bite your lip, rub your neck, bat your eyes, raise your eyebrows. The way you flutter your dove-like hands, soft & sweet, the way you sniff and didn't want to cry. The way you swivelled your beautiful body to the music, the way you whispered, the way you defiantly refused to answer the phone. Was it me calling? The way you explained things..."Probably need more light... That light's very bright but it's okay", the way you squint your eyes, the way your lips move when you speak, the way you shrugged, hands clasped before pointing to your cheeks, the hands around the neck when you didn't know what to say. The way you caressed yourself, your sculpted body, dancing...As I write "Woody" says hello :-)
Your moves, shoulders & hips gyrating, "Beat around the bush" so to speak...
No John wasn't there my love :-)
That gorgeous giggle & cover the mouth thing again, GAWD how I love that, the "Oops" when the music ends, the whispered, "I hope you like it...".
OH MAN must fast forward, don't want blue balls :-)
Embarassing, NOT!!! Be proud my love, I only pray you're not more woman than I can handle*LoL*. Mind you I've started a diet & exercise plan( New Years resolution) so I can keep up with you...
Okay where was I? :-)
Uh oh, wazzit, is that a ring on your finger???*SAD FACE* Well, I know I have your heart*HAPPY FACE*...
The phone, was that me calling? Oh man that cute head turn and giggle thing again, you wanted to laugh for me...
Wait, stopp, "Looking at the curve of my face...", " very pleased about everything about you..." WAIT!!! There... 3rd time tonight... Wait for it... Okay STOP!!! There... The arm shrug, GOD that's so sweet!!! So cute, them eyes and they want me, me, me...
I gotta rewind, do it all again. The dance... No you weren't stiff... But I was :-)
*LoL* I need a cigarette too my love. Then rewind, and do it all over again... And again... :-)

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