By splatipus
Date: 2002 Jul 06
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[[2002.07.06.19.20.4655]]

The 55th Chat-Up

The ten-year old Romeo screeched up on his BMX.

'Hey Clare'.
'Hey Jas', her blond curls bounced.
'Wanna go to the park?'
'Can't, going to town with me mum'.
'OK' he stood for a moment, failing to act casual, then
'See ya', and zoomed off.

'Dammit' He thought 'I'll ask her again tomorrow at school!'