By Edmundo Daudi
Date: 2010 Oct 21
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A Canook

Carolann a swarthy
nice lipped Canook
who from me some abstract laughter took,
and me from her,
and some succored hue
that beauty
could like abstract too

we talk all night
and tried to fight
but found no war in any nook
she flowed like water
a country brook
her sense of life
gods undertook

At dawn I touched her well seamed lips
with my lips, and my finger tips
then we were friends with bounded hips
I showed her poems, got style tips.

Carolann
dazzl'd eyed Canook
my life has joy
you're in my book.


-Edmundo Daudi