By There Is No Breathing
Submitted by Max-Rom
Date: 2002 Apr 29
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Beneath an epidermis of twinkling stars
A butter cream moon glimmers
layered atop the infinitely exspansive void
My eyes digest the scene...

Of the brightest smiles
and warmest laughter
as nature saturates me

in its electric wave
of lips caressing,
each touch unlacing
the hardened heart

these thoughts confessing
there is no breathing
when existence records
our lives apart

Copyright(c)2002 Joseph Allen Hardy/Max-Rom

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