Hi everyone. I'm really new to this place and I have a few poems that I just can't hold inside of myself anymore. I love the stuff you guys *and gals* put in here...if offers me more comfort than you realize
lydia - lol gotta love them poems. They get so graphic! lol
sinned--- jungle on my own- i really like the first part, but "for you"- that was great!
jill- i really really liked "walk of shame...."and iron clad--- wow
suga
lydia
*~Terry~* HEY! I'm completely infatuated with "It's all our fault". I really liked the progression of the piece. The words were sentimentally true and flowed very well!
*~Angel~* "Greed" was very cute! You have a real knack for saying things in a way that just catches the mind's eye.
*~Megs~* "Marionette"...wow, what can I say! It's a great concept with a great writer to back it! Go you!
*~Dallasgirl~* "Fairytale Fantasy" and "Butterfly" were both very entertaining. I like your style and POV...keep up the great work!
*~Claire Brown Bower~* Amazing...simply amazing...."the pretender" was beyond my own vocabulary of defining it, so I won't even try
~*christopher lake~* "promise me you won't" was extremely touching.
well, it was opening night for Brigadoon! It was an awesome show and an awesome party afterwards. Hope I can start writing some better stuff again soon. I'm sorry for my more recent, choppy, unpolished poems. Promise...they'll get better!
love-n-lollipops,
laurel
Kirk - I finally finished the ramble and I must admit, the section on 'Time to Waste' really hit home. I felt like you were preaching the gospel. I'm ready to be baptised now.
*~Dee~* Both of your coffee pieces were excellent! I don't know how else to describe them!
*~Guppy~* "Blinded with silence" is a beautifully written piece.
*~Gala~* "Dancing on Starlight" is thoroughly enjoyable!
*~Dallasgirl~* I could really share your emotions in "Love's Ghost". Really liked it!
*~Kiwi~* You have a talent with vivid words! I loved "fire"
G'bye all, off to another day of performance! Tonight's a big night for me. My family, who doesn't understand why I want to "waste my life on theatre" is coming, so I have to prove them wrong.
Love-n-lollipops,
Laurel
laurel~ Break a leg.....and thank you for the comments;
You too lydia, they made my day brighter...
terry
An earnest thank you to those who have read my poems and placed comments here. I am pleased that they have been enjoyed by someone.
kacey ~ "And he falls through her hands like sand." is delicately poetic and a very striking endline.
laurel ahlfeld ~ In Their Eyes ~ "You show up in the darndest places For someone who's never around" ...deliciously sardonic.
kevin urenda ~ I enjoyed the very light alliteration in "worth" and your "truth of you" line struck nicely. Your "not listening" rang reality, loud and clear.
chimbu ~ Alone ~ It is only in the "reaching" that one is able to "find." And your "Valentines day card" ~ what a charming vignette...
Gala ~ Spirit Soul Wandering ~ lovely sensual images here.
~~Will continue to read as I have time...what a delightful array of romantic expression here!
~ Claire
I think that all of these poems suck and I cannot forge any of them and send them to a contest and win money. They all suck. You ought to get some good poems before just making a dull sight as in this one. none of these poems even rhyme!
*laughing at the 13 year old forger* geez!
Ms Spears - Lack of talent hasn't stopped you from making money either...but you are a babe. Look forward to seeing you in Playboy in a couple of years when you try to revive your career.
Paul...ha!
that was tackier of Paul than was of Britney, maybe they are related.
Silent - you can't take a joke?
Claire Brown Bower~ 'Scrabble by Moonlight' is VERY sexy! What a picture...
sinneD~ 'a jungle on my own' was thought provoking. I liked it much.
laurel~ 'Cabaret' took my back to college and the stage for awhile. I know that feeling of washing off the paint while wishing like hell I could keep the mask and the magic a little longer. ~sigh~ good job.
terry