From: Claire<BR>
Date: 19 July 2000<P>

Zero #1 ~ Your anger is clearly expressed in "Liar"... betrayal is an angering event, to be sure. <BR>
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Sarah ~ The language of love and longing is easily read in "night to come."<BR>
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Riggs ~ There is far more to be said than I know to say about "Poem for a Broken Man"... painful, clever ("Noel wonders where she stamped his use by date."), sobering. Good writing. <BR>
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Kevin Urenda ~ That you began your "silence" with the lowercase "and" gives the reader a sense of a continuing reflection, of a story, shared, but already in the process of being told. Very, very nice. <BR>
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~ Claire<BR>
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From: Impatient<BR>
Date: 19 July 2000<P>

Nikki - "So, I'm sorry for not being original and diverse in my comments, but know that I think you all are wonderful beyond words." :-) As if that isn't fairly original or diverse. Whatever. You like us. We like you. The words do not need to be new. They just need to be true. You rule too. <BR>
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I get impatient. 
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From: sarah<BR>
Date: 19 July 2000<P>

devaa........ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh d e e v a a.......that.....was just one absolutely erotic piece of poetry my little triscuit!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!<BR>
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'cept i like erotic pieces of poetry.....i think they tend to be a little more....heartfelt, shall we say, but deevaa......im very picky with erotic poetry and that my little lovebug was at its finest!!!!<BR>
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sarah
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From: Tara<BR>
Date: 19 July 2000<P>

Sarah<BR>
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I love your two new subs - <BR>
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Tara
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From: tara<BR>
Date: 19 July 2000<P>

Gala:<BR>
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Sacred is beautiful... thank you
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From: Nanna   [email-masked]<BR>
Date: 19 July 2000<P>

This is new to me, but finally a place to view/submit poetry and make friends...I've read a lot about this "HOT" poem in the comment section...which one is it?
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From: Gala<BR>
Date: 19 July 2000<P>

Touching tongues!!!!!!! Chris W rocks!
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From: Galadrial<BR>
Date: 19 July 2000<P>

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Hey Dee! I made him blush! That is so cute.........<BR>
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                                   Evil Gala
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From: Jenna Holland ([email-masked])<BR>
Date: 19 July 2000<P>

shimmergloom- Thanks for the kind words<BR>
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-Jenna-<BR>
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From: Chris W. at [email-masked]<BR>
Date: 19 July 2000<P>

hey all, <BR>
well, work has been kicking my butt, but hopefully tonight i'll make a sub or two.<BR>
i've not read much recently, but i will tonight, and i can't wait!!<BR>
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*blushing*<BR>
gala....thank you so much.  you spoil me with your comments!<BR>

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From: deevaa ([email-masked])<BR>
Date: 19 July 2000<P>

(grin) damn its been awhile since I've done the comments thing....my boy has been sick and that means Mumma gets NO sleep....<BR>
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Sarah -- goodness thanks for your compliments on 'idle day dreams'.... coming from the chick who wrote 'night to come and 'guitar' what a compliment, you must have yourself a mighty fine muse my girl.<BR>
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Gala -- you made who blush? (and I KNOW Chris W rocks, why do you think I'm gonna marry him?) 'Eating desert first' mmmm.... sensual.<BR>
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Kev -- 'silence' is beautiful.<BR>
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gupp -- miss you.... 'parts' and 'sleepy time rationale' .... I don't know how you slip in and out of styles so seemlessly... you amaze me and I am honoured to count you among my close friends.<BR>
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Riggs -- sweetheart, 'Poem for a broken man' OUCH... wow... powerfully written, well done.<BR>
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I've a new painting which has been named 'caressed by the wind' by Chris W.... I've written something to go with it, (which I'll post shortly) but if anyone else feels inspired by the painting or the name -- Chris, especially you -- its only fair.<BR>
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take care of your hearts<BR>
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dee
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From: sarah [email-masked]<BR>
Date: 19 July 2000<P>

well dee, now ya did it, you mentioned the whole "muse" thing lol now im gonna talk everyones ear off!!!!!!!!!!<BR>
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yes i've met a WONDERFUL man....an absolutely wonderful man with gorgeous blue eyes and who is really really tall.......i'm only 5'1 and he is 6'4 i don't even reach his shoulder!!!!!!! but he is beautiful and sweet and cuddly and he plays guitar.....so incredibly well might i add, i could listen to him for hours......and he's a school teacher, kids love him!!!!! and he loves me.......and i love him........and life, is just very very good and passionate right now!!!!<BR>
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so off i go to shop, lol hehehe.......shopping is just too much fun.<BR>
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sarah<BR>
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oh yeah:  i've been meaning to say this, but all of you who have commented on my works, thank you so incredibly much, coming from someone here who is incredibly critical of my own work.....i don't think much of what i write is that wonderful, but i'm glad that you guys like it.  its a part of me that i like to share with you....thank you so much!!!!!!!
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From: deevaa<BR>
Date: 19 July 2000<P>

Sarah (5'1 rocks... me too) yahhhh for you!! <BR>
When I was younger (like 15 or so) I wrote this list of things that I wanted in a man.... basically my dream man was John Taylor from Duran Duran....<BR>
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6'4 (grin), blue/green eyes, long-ish hair, non-smoker, long artistic fingers, broad shoulders, a good dresser...with a smile which melts... I've no idea why I found these qualities important back then, but I've still got some of them... nothing turns my head more than a tall well dressed guy with long hair.... nuts.<BR>
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dee
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From: deevaa<BR>
Date: 19 July 2000<P>

Chris.... oh wow...  I LOVE it.... beautiful... <BR>
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"Tilting my head slightly, I allowed myself to be taken <BR>
by you, the wind, and the moment."<BR>
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(gasp) perfect imagery... stunning.<BR>
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And....<BR>
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Jlor... long time no see, welcome back!<BR>
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dee<BR>
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From: sarah<BR>
Date: 19 July 2000<P>

oh deeva he is beautiful like that, he has that roughened look on his skin cause he works outside alot, and then he has these briliant brilliant blue eyes...he used to have long hair, haha back in his band days...he was in a band....and he has those broad shoulders, he just engulfs me!!!!!! its the best feeling in the world!!!!!!!!!!
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From: deevaa<BR>
Date: 19 July 2000<P>

OK Sarah rub it in.... (grumble) just cause I'm single and hating it right now... thats fine, I can take it....<BR>
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I'm about 70% jealous Vs 30% happy for ya....<BR>
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dee<BR>

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From: C.L. Hollinghead<BR>
Date: 19 July 2000<P>

Ok....I know I haven't been submitting many comments but I'm just getting in the hang of it. <BR>
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deevaa-'Caressed by the Wind' and your painting were both so bueatiful. The poem was very vivid and I loved it!<BR>
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'The Springtime of Love' was very smooth and the words just flowed off the paper.<BR>
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Ya'll have a nice night!
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