From: terry<BR>
Date: 21 July 2000<P>

Kevin~ 'silence'  was very well written. I love the phrase...'her legend grew within <BR>
the shadows of my sleep'... very well turned...<BR>
t.
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From: Toklas<BR>
Date: 21 July 2000<P>

hi everyone!<BR>
I have been away making online art gallery. Deeva, Galadriel, the gallery opens on July 29th- I will be in touch re- your poem painting and send you the addy when it is up. The gallery contains a Collaboration Room especially for artists who team up to do a work.  I like the new poem /painting Chris and Deeva!<BR>
<BR>
Gala, I liked "Sacred" also - especially the first part.<BR>
<BR>
I will read more when I have the gallery opened everyone.<BR>
take care<BR>
Toke<BR>
PS. I have revised my homepage and some of my art/poems are there now. I write and paint as Medusa also. There is one that may interest you Deeva- called Weeping Woman.<BR>
<BR>
http://home.talkcity.com/EaselSt/medusaccc/poetry_index.htm
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From: deevaa ([email-masked])<BR>
Date: 21 July 2000<P>

heya!<BR>
<BR>
Terry -- you know I love your lady of the shadows, and I love the words too... I'm proud to have inspired t you to pick up your brushes, you know I am now fearful of my job!<BR>
<BR>
Chris W -- thankyou, thankyou, thankyou.<BR>
<BR>
Freddy -- I noticed your email address, a new Kiwi, welcome. 'wreak' was a great image.<BR>
<BR>
guppy -- wow, wow... wow....<BR>
<BR>
"i sparkle in the morning sun<BR>
but you<BR>
you shine alone<BR>
i've never known anyone<BR>
so colorful to view"<BR>
<BR>
You NEVER fail to amaze.... <BR>
<BR>
Toks -- I checked out your site, very nice..... I've got you bookmarked.... I've just updated my page too, http://homepages.paradise.net.nz/~deevaa<BR>
<BR>
thats all from me.... Friday night, time for me to put down my paintbrushes for abit.<BR>
<BR>
Take care of your hearts.<BR>
<BR>
dee
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From: deevaa (again)<BR>
Date: 21 July 2000<P>

by the way guppy... I want to be "so colorful to view"... thats the most perfect description.... gives my tummy the flutters.<BR>
<BR>
dee
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From: dee<BR>
Date: 21 July 2000<P>

Oh damn.. missed one more.... CL.. thankyou for your compliments (and infact everyone whose commented on my stuff recently).... thankyou!!<BR>
<BR>
(gone for real this time)<BR>
<BR>
dee<BR>
<BR>
(wiggles out stage right)
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From: Dawn<BR>
Date: 21 July 2000<P>

Guppy..."raindrop kisses" is beautiful.  It brought tears to my eyes.<BR>
<BR>
Dawn
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From: A.I.<BR>
Date: 21 July 2000<P>

So wonderful it is!!! I really appreciate all the composers of the poems. So GREAT they are!!!
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From: toklas<BR>
Date: 21 July 2000<P>

Gupppy ,<BR>
the "so colourful to view" stanza of your new poem is really wonderful poetry. Thank you.<BR>
Toke
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From: french tickler<BR>
Date: 21 July 2000<P>

guppy, "raindrop Kisses".....was dissapointing. I hope you write better from now on.....
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From: Jenna Holland ([email-masked])<BR>
Date: 21 July 2000<P>

shimmergloom- Loved "Then I smile" and "Deepest part of you" I really enjoy your works, glad you found the blender!<BR>
<BR>
Deevaa and Chris- "Inspired by the moon" You two are so talented (you dont need me to tell you) and together your works just make something beautiful!<BR>
<BR>
Terry- Glad you are back to drawing so you can share them with us.<BR>
<BR>
-Jenna-
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From: optimistic_pessimist85<BR>
Date: 21 July 2000<P>

Stephen- I really liked your work in "third wheel", it sounded very real,..and i appreciate that...keep submitting..<BR>
%me%
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Date: 21 July 2000<P>

Hey,..how's it going??....Zero #1,..i appreciate your comments,..and i have one for you: I really like your originality, and the diversity in your poetry,..it keeps it very interesting, as well as talented...keep writing..:)..<BR>
%me%
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From: Freddy<BR>
Date: 21 July 2000<P>

Thanks for the welcome, dee!<BR>
<BR>
I only had the time to skim through everybody"s poems, but I must say I was impressed... <BR>
<BR>
Freddy
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From: the guppy<BR>
Date: 21 July 2000<P>

french tickler,<BR>
<BR>
disappointing how?...what didn't you like about it?...i think it pretty much conveyed the exact sentiment i was going for, and in the fashion i was going for...i'm curious to know what you didn't like about it...<BR>
<BR>
i don't write for the sake of living up to anyone else's expectations...or to impress anybody...i do it for fun<BR>
<BR>
"it doesn't mean that much to me to mean that much to you"---neil young<BR>
<BR>
i am curious about the basis of your take on it...the style?...the feeling?...the choice of words?...what didn't you like?<BR>
<BR>
take care,<BR>
gup
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Date: 21 July 2000<P>

guppy~ 'raindrop kisses'- I echo what everyone has said (well not exactly everyone). It was well written, communicated the emotions and moment well, and I liked it...I also agree the line <BR>
..."i sparkle in the morning sun<BR>
but you<BR>
you shine alone"...<BR>
is VERY memorable...kudos.<BR>
terry<BR>

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From: katie<BR>
Date: 21 July 2000<P>

Guppy<BR>
Thin air memories and raindrop kisses were both so well written.. I really enjoy your work because I find it all so easy to relate to.. you have a talent .. keep up the good work!!<BR>
                                      katie
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From: sarah<BR>
Date: 21 July 2000<P>

guppyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy<BR>
<BR>
i love your stuff man!!!!! well, you already know i do.....but i love your raindrop kisses!!!!!!! smooches!<BR>
<BR>
deevaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa<BR>
<BR>
honey flower, don't be jealous!!! its lonely......but....it makes what comes, more worthwhile......i think it gives you a appreciation of what you have, and the little things you can have with someone, which alot of times in relationships are overlooked, but if you cherish what you have or what you don't have, you gave yourself a different perspective you might not of otherwise had.<BR>
<BR>
chris w........okay, you just ROCK my man ROCK ROCK ROCK ROCK ROCK!!!!! <BR>
<BR>
sarah
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