Freddy...
your work entitled "model" was beautiful! i love it! if i did inspire you to write it, i am amazingly honored. thank you for sharing these thoughts with me (and the other blenderites). we are so lucky to have you abord.
ml
-Starr
I dont have any comment. but I just want to know how to
join. I want to Published my poem, but i dont know how.
Please tell me, more about that...
Primrose luv just go to the submissions page
*~guppy~* Ribbit was wonderful! It sure tickled my funny bone!
*~Chris W.~* <Blushing a bit> why thank you kind sir! That is going to make not only my day and week, but perhaps my month too! As for your recent work "over within" it was marvelous! I must say my the line "such is the music of the currents of your very self" was remarkable! I did a doubletake on it(Sometimes I stumble over beautiful words).
*~Zero #1~* Gossamer was very nice. It brought a smile too. Hey, I found my plastic slipper...it's taking refuge in Zibabwe right now. It might be a while before I get it is in use again.
*~Starr~* You're too kind to me! I don't know what to say! You are very right though. My life is full of heartbreak now. It's not what most would consider too recent, but still recent enough to still be hurting. Sometimes it's hard to fall asleep at night too. Perhaps I will write you a letter tonight when I'm struggling in the wee hours if you don't mind. The tea has been helping though. <takes another sip>
Laurel~~~ lol I'm glad you liked gossamer..it brought quite a few smiles to my face too =). I wouldn't worry about that plastic slipper that you lost...cause somehow I think you've been saving that glass one for someone really special. Until that time comes, go barefoot! lol
Frosted One~~~ I'm sorry about that last one, it wasn't one recent. I usually write stuff down, and then put them on here when I can think of nothing. I didn't mean to offend you. Take it easy and don't worry so much. (it's not good for the soul)
terry, thank you very very much for your extensive comments!! it really helps me to know what people like and dislike about what i write.
i must say that you are an excellent artist, and combining your poetry with your art is going to make your work all the more beautiful (i'm already a big fan of your poetry alone).
dawn: i'm glad you liked yield...and it was kinda cool how yours showed up right after mine!!
laurel: always willing to make your day, or week, or month, but it's easy enough to do when you write so beautifully.
Hi:
Could you please tell me how to find a poem that I read a few months ago? I know the title...I hope...just not the exact month I read it.
susan
Hey there.. I'm new.. I submitted a poem.. I was wondering what you guys thought of it... Its called "Loved".. Thanx for your time.
Chris------
Circumstance-------yikes!!!!!
It is a tapestry----I could feel this one-----see the colors---damn sir! You are in the wrong field!
Yowza.........I am proud of you!
Gala
Btw- I just wanted to tell you all how much I enjoy your works.
jesse...just read your poem.
i related to some of what you said, especially the conflicting feelings of friendship versus something more. i've had that same conflict in the past and it can be hard to deal with.
if you want a bit of advice (and take this with a grain of salt as i am no expert), try combining some lines and losing some commas. it may help the piece to flow better.
but good job!!
Guppy, I loved "ribbit"-- what a great poem! very inventive metaphor!
I am looking for a particular poem. I do not know who the author is or its title. I do know that it is in the movie patch adams and he reads it to his girlfriend after she passes away. I also know a verse: I love you without knowing how.. without reason. I really enjoyed this poem and woulld like to send it to my boyfriend.. unfortunetly I have been unsuccessful in locating it. Any help would be appreciated thank you!!!
stacy
email: cholypoken@aol.com
I just read through a TON of old new subs. WOW I have missed not much time but so much good material. My online time is limited by lack of computer so I am real sporadic about keeping up. JUST for the record...I have found a REAL decent guy sooooooooooooooooo keep your fingers crossed.
Gala...Ash...Kev...Dee...HMS...Nikki...etc...I MISS you guys. Oh would there be stories. Oh well...my vacay from 'puters will only last three more weeks. *sigh* Miss me?
Till later...
Megs
hey everyone!
****laurel****- hey thanks for the brownies! :) your writing is beautiful, don't stop.
****Zero#1****- hey your forgiven only if you forgive me. stay in touch. Best Friends!!!:)
everyone's writings are wonderful, keeping going!
Always,
The Frosted One
ohhhhhhhhhhhhh chris......oh sweet lordy chris!!!!!!!!
*fanning self*
whew!!!!!!!!!!!!
oh man.......*getting out ice cube* honey child....sweet man alive!!!!!!!
could it get any hotter in here.....?????
now if you put your tangling tongues and that one together and caressed by the wind after......oh man......your woman would be PUTTY i say PUTTY!!!!!!!!!!!!
as if she wouldn't be anyway........
(grin) I just sold the entire 'Recline Series' to one buyer.... hehehehehe....... I'm SO damn happy!! now I can pay my phone bill, and get a haircut!... and maybe pay off some credit card debt, wonderful.... (giggling and dashing about)
ohhhhhh -- I'll settle down soon and read some poetry hey?
dee
laurel~ All three subs 'Heaven's Caress', 'Faded Tears', and 'I Meant Forever' are really good...but the last was very full of terrific words and images...
"Wine aged with time and fit for gods
They spilled on your anticipating ears
And you drank them in"
Wow those words sent shivers....very very good!
terry
WOW Dee...Major congrats!!! You are as they say 'up and coming' in the art world. But we your friends already knew that! Now let everyone else catch up...they will and they are...
hisses and hugs your way...
terry
hisses and hugs? hmmm... not sure about the hisses but I'll take all the hugs I can!
dee