Zero #1, Nikki, Angel, & Deevaa- Thanks for the tries on giving me an answer, but I'm really hoping that Zero #1 is right and he is asking himself the same thing. Thanks for keeping my hopes up. I'll find out soon enough :o)
-Jenna-
Hank--good to see more of your stuff...I think 'Daydream of a foolish heart' is so sweet, and quite eloquent, like all of your work. keep it up.
nikki
Michal~~~ Hey, sorry if our works are similar,,I haven't really read much of yours now that I think of it, if I've read one at all(sorry). I hope you like them though,,even though their not much. I hope you continue to write on the blender...and maybe I'll read some from now on! Thanx!
Jenna~~~ lol I'm sure that he is asking himself the same question you are!!! C'mon now chin up, and now worries K? It makes for a better living, not to mention a better day. (give the world a smile too,,,and maybe he'll see it=)
Check ya later blendies,
Zero #1
Zero, blendies? I DON'T think so. Blenderite -- please, you are a newbie, so I'll take no offense this time, don't do it again.
Nikki ~ Um. "1,2,3 shots..." You'd scare me off too darlin. ;-) Most guys don't want a drill sargeant for a lover..hehehe.
Stephen ~ You're never better off dead. Not ever.
Reading along after being absent awhile--
Nikki--"Looking" was lovely, yet "1,2,3 shots, you're out!" was well written, and mostly true, but scary to say the least. "Quitting": Keep it up, it's a bad habbit. The cig part not the kissing part! :-P
Zero #1--"Completely Uncomplete" I could understand, "Water" was neat...and "Madly Mistaken" uhh wow.
Toklas--"Medusa's Song" was beautiful
Gala--"Cherion's Song" was great, if you're not a writer, you should look into it. I loved the beginning of "The Heart Travels"... made me laugh.. even though its not funny.
Indigo--"Untold" sounded like lyrics for a song...and I think I got the perfect guitar tabs for it! :-)
Sinned--I could see the large meaning of "Someday".. good poem.
Freddy--"Friday Night in Wellington" was good but really sad. "audition" .. So true... so VERY true.. god am I sick of "actors"
laurel--even though it was short, "Fruit Flies" made me think.
Jillian--"Once" I could really relate to.
Jenna--"The Times" was very very true.
Kare--In "Hearts" the opening parts are so true and well written.
Kiwi--"teardrops and sunshine": *sniff*
Terry--"A Moment of Shakespeare" *drool* one of the best things I've ever read...damn...
Thanks for brightening my day with these works people, keep submitting, I like reading more than writting :-)
I've never written a comment before, and I've been on this site for a long time. Not always submitting, mostly admiring.
Anyway, just wanted to say, Guppy, you are awesome. Some people just have a way with words, but what you have is more. You have found a way to place exactly what you want to say into convenient poem format. I'm still working on that.
Nikki and Chris W. Thanks for your comments..
~*Crystal*~I thought that "missing you" was well written, and I really like the style that you wirte in.. Keep it up! :0)
Hey Blenderites
sorry I have not commented lately - but I wanted to take a moment and tell you how great the recent subs are - Nikki - wow - you, as always manage to strike something in me.... Terry, good to see some subs from you, I was beginning to think you were becoming all work and no play.....
I too miss Misti and Chris and the contribution to the site..
and everyone else, sorry not to mention by name... but I have yet to read anything lately that is not great
I just wish I knew how to write - lovey dovey mushy poetry - cause I am madly in love - and planning a wedding....
Wow - I might never write angsty poetry again... he better provide me some other outlet :-)
love to you all, take care of your hearts
Tara
i feelt like crying , when i read some of these poems
i never thought there would be others out there who feelt the way i feel , some of these poems helpt clear alot of doupht in my mind
thank you to all the writers
Guppy-
"Prime for the counting" is absolutely, completely, perfectly beautiful.
'Nuff said
Tanna
Time for me to catch up-
SaRaH- I loved 'How Soon is Now'. It was definately one of thye most chilling things I've read in a long time. Beautiful and flowing.
L. PeNnY- "Drunk On Wine I Have Never Tasted" was beautiful, dark, sexy and free. I really loved that one. Great!
GuPpy- Thanks for submitting 'Dirt' by 'Phish'. The lyrics were moving. I loved the ending 'I'll never hear heer voice again. *bittersweet* I am just getting into Phish. They are awesome. :)
-ZoE