Date: 12 August 2000
glen and betty. you deserve each other.
i am an anonymous retard. i delight in contributing cowardly inane sniping shitty comments to this here Board. i do not have a sex life. i do not have an inner life. i need help but i do not have richard simmons's phone number and i am too camera shy to go on jenny jones.
gala---consummation...i really liked the last few lines...with the "i love you" tucked under your tongue and all...great stuff...the rest of it was good too, but the ending was perfect...those lines could stand alone and be awesome
gup
HYPOCRISY!!!!!
HIPPOPOTAMUS!!?
(sorry riggs...had to chime in with my own war cry)
HIPPOCAMPUS HYPERBOLE!!??
ummmm sorry guys (I was caught up in the concept)
terry
guppy~ I loved 'placed'.
"i calmly kiss her narrow mind"
That line alone created the most delightful image!
Gala~ I agree about the last two lines of 'Consummation'. It ended a wonderful piece in a most visual way...BRAVO!
Michael~ 'No More' communicated layers of sadness that worked beyond the words you chose. The whole WAS greater in this case because it carried your emotions right into my heart.
terry (who is WAY behind and reading backwards)
We sure showed that guy.
Guppy, Gala, and Terry: The three of you have submitted incredible poems recently. They all are magnificent. I felt like I was witnessing the all-star team of the Blender in action. Beautiful work, all.
the fringe of apathy was the most intense thing i've read in a long time.
Guppy, Terry and Chris-------
You guys are making the moldy old elven broad blush.....but thank you.
Ahem.....shortly, I will opening a web page called Galadrial's Garden.....I have invited some Blender faves to contribute, and the site is amazing----no thanks to me, but rather thanks to the talents of Terry and Deevaa, and of course, the continental cowboy---Mr. Christian. There are also links for some of my favorite sites, including this one, and one other anthology.
I'll let you know when it's up...and thank everyone for their kindness. I still don't think I'm interesting enough to have my own site----but it is exciting for me.
Gala
just about dancing.........
Hippy dippy chicks
Hypothesis
Hyperbole
Hip Hop Hooray
I do not feel that by choosing to post anonymous comments this makes me a "coward" or a "hypocrite"...I am simply a bemused, apathetic observer of the immature melodrama and peculiar ass kissing aspect of this site. The truly exceptional poems are rarely commented on. The mediocre poems tend to rule the day. Seems to me like there is a bit of a mutual admiration society thing going on here much of the time.
I do have a life. I have a job and a significant other and money in the bank and quite a few friends. I just don't choose to blow my own horn...unlike most of you self-righteous egomaniacs.
Oh please.....if you had a life butt head, you wouldn't have time or interest to act as a gadfly.
Oh----and by definition, "apathetic" would render you incapable of being such a paltry critic.
Those who can't are usually the critics........
Romeo Blue~ 'Ramble' was beautifully written!
t.
Terry~ "Why do you love me?" was beautiful! *sigh*
ok anonymous then instead of wasting time griping why don't u spend ur time praisings the poems u speak of, might make others wish to see them too if u care enough to read
ok anonymous then instead of wasting time griping why don't u spend ur time praisings the poems u speak of, might make others wish to see them too if u care enough to read
heh heh blame me for being new k
jackryhme...
I truly enjoyed "tired." It is how I've been feeling lately.
Remember, we all have our own style of writing. Some people like it, some don't. The important thing is to keep writing. And write for yourself, not others. And don't feel bad if nobody comments on your work, I get few, if any comments on mine, but regardless, I still love to write.
Take care~
Dawn