From: it dosent matter<BR>
Date: 17 September 2000<P>

B.K.<BR>
       i swear by the time feast was over i was positively drooling   thank you my lady
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From: terry<BR>
Date: 17 September 2000<P>

it doesnt matter~ [comfort...] was a very interesting read. I found it very effective in the way you communicated a bilateral exchange of emotion without the characters ever speaking. You have a way of revealing the internal struggle of emotion within the narrator's point of view, giving the piece real depth.<BR>
t.
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From: terry<BR>
Date: 17 September 2000<P>

BK~ 'Feasting On You'----MMMM French Toast, maple syrup, whipped cream, then the chef......what a Sunday brunch to imagine..lol<BR>
t.
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From: Galadrial<BR>
Date: 17 September 2000<P>

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Hank..........Vous m'étonnez encore, cowboy Stupéfiant comment vos mots sont le baume, l'ungent à un coeur faisant mal.          <BR>
                                     Gala<BR>
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From: Hank   lovesdoormat@aol.com<BR>
Date: 17 September 2000<P>

Madame, je suis honoré que quelques mes lèvres de mots soulageraient vos cœur.  Mon âme pense-vous blessant quelque raison ça afflige. I hope you have a wonderful day.<BR>
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*Hank*
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From: Megs<BR>
Date: 17 September 2000<P>

Mmmmmm...je suis parle francais...mais...I have no clue what is going on.  Englais? Por favor?  Hehe....or whatever.<BR>
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B.K.-  Your piece about taste...with the French Toast.  Yum!!! Made ME hungry *grin*<BR>
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From: B.K.<BR>
Date: 17 September 2000<P>

Ahh Terry: As my hearts secrets unflold to your care<BR>
           Safe in your keeping, setting me free<BR>
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Between you, it doesn't matter, and Hank, a girl (sigh)<BR>
can barely breathe around here.
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From: terry<BR>
Date: 17 September 2000<P>

BK~ Thank you very much. Such praise certainly makes posting to the Blender a gratifying endeavor. And by the way, I loved the metaphor of words pulling you in like quicksand, in your post '~Quicksand~'. It has a ring of truth for a lot of what I read here. Especially your own words...<BR>
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terry
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From: B.K.<BR>
Date: 17 September 2000<P>

It dosent matter: WOW! Was that dream in color or black and white? What amazing imagery! 
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From: terry<BR>
Date: 17 September 2000<P>

it doesnt matter~ excellent job of putting dream imagery to paper (or computer in this case). You never said if this was an actual dream, but there are a couple powerful archetypical themes underlying your images. Thanks for sharing.<BR>
t.
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From: Kare Bare<BR>
Date: 17 September 2000<P>

Heya people!<BR>
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**Mandi** She said She Just Fell Out Of Love With Me.....very true...only with me he was the one that fell out of love with me and i was too in love to see it OR believe it.  Very good, yet sad poem.  Keep up the good work.<BR>
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Kare Bare
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From: B.K.<BR>
Date: 17 September 2000<P>

Megs: Thanks, I forgot the strawberries and whipped cream...LOL. Sometimes if feels like you dress your poems up and send them out only wanting to bring them back and redress them again after leaving something out or maybe overdressing them...LOL Editing..ugh! Do you ever do that?
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From: deevaa girl<BR>
Date: 17 September 2000<P>

heya heya (grumble) there is so much talent here and I can't even write my name now-a-days.<BR>
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I've done a big huge read.... lots stood  out... <BR>
Riggs 'Memoirs of a High School' -- I agree with gup about the bite.... very well written.<BR>
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Devin, 'Finding me' was wonderful.<BR>
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Megs -- you 'bumped' into Riggs and some of his bite  musta rubbed off.... way to go.<BR>
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Chris Lake 'Thinking of you' was very tender.<BR>
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BK -- 'Feasting on you'  -- I liked very much.<BR>
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and Hank 'Beauty shines' ..... (sigh) I loved it.....  and you and Gala work so well off each other... although Gala, my French isn't good enough to translate your piece... you gonna share or do I have to suffer in French failure hell?<BR>
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 I had an interesting chat with Hank about  if, because its in French it is automatically more romantic.... I am undecided on that topic, New Zealanders will never forgive the French for a sneaky bombing of a GreenPeace ship, and for nuclear testing in the pacific.... I do try and judge the words on their own merit.... (smiles)<BR>
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take care of your hearts<BR>
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dee
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From: Megs<BR>
Date: 17 September 2000<P>

Dee-  Silly semi-drunk piece.  How sad is your life when you are drunk at 2 p.m. on a Saturday afternoon writing on the Internet?  Hehe...us crazy college kids :)  And thanks to Riggs for the "bump."<BR>
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B.K.-  Hmmmmmmmmmmm...strawberries and whipped cream...you have to stop :)  I just ate like an entire BUNCH of Ben and Jerry's super-fattening ice cream.  How unromantic is THAT!!! Hehe...<BR>
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As for French being "more romantic" well...how romantic can it be if you don't understand it.  I am in French 2 so I only have bad connections with the language...tests and such...maybe if someone wrote me nice things in French it would be a little better than vocab tests and conjugations *grin*
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