Michael very well spoke on turn away
slug you've inspired an idea i have to work with thank you for your poem also very well spoken
and BK.... lol ....you are dangerous
Megs~ Wow...'Crying to Him' was a most vivid poetic image in so few words. Inspired writing! (Even if heartbreaking.)
t.
Michael~,it doesnt matter~, BK~ all very, very good bumps there...and welcome back Michael!
Kev~ 'Think McFly'...I bow to a master wordsmith. You forge well.
Gala~ 'As a male, 'Yielding' was a breath of fresh air.
t.
Kirk ~ I don't seem to be able to find "Tears". I posted it the same time as "Dolphins" and I wasn't smart enough to save it to disk before posting it...
Misti ~ do you have a copy of it?
Michael (Kicking himself)....
***IMPORTANT****
Hey guys, hit this web site so this young man can win
his girlfriend. what a proposal ;)
Help this guy get married!
Believe it or not, this is serious.
Joe, who is 23, has been in love with Chrissie, also 23, since their senior year of high school.
He bet her that he could make a webpage and get 1,000,000 hits. He said that if he did it, she has to marry him and she *agreed*. He's at about 21,000 now and has to do it by her 24th birthday on December 16th. So just visit this webpage once and help this nice guy get married. I think it's a cute proposal dare... :-) Spread the love to your friends too. :-)
http://www.geocities.com/will_u_marry_me_chrissie
Gala: You always get something started around here! That's why it's so much fun. You are just way too Cool!
slug: I like what you have to say in 'feminist love'. Hang tough till you get it all.
Guppy: Just the title had me laughing out loud. Then the white meat with wings, you set the scene so well and then
take us all out with you. A chivalrous wolf with deep neck wounds...hummm
Terry: There is too still a unicorn out there.....isn't
there?
and it doesn't matter: I'm only dangerous when it really matters.
Megs-
Just a quick note to say sorry i haven't gotten around to emailing you yet! I'm so busy! I will sometime!
Beth
Ah Jackie dear......
Beauty may in fact be the bait...but it isn't the worm that lands the fish----it is the skill of the fisher. And yes---sometimes we lose those we love most---for silly, or stupid reasons. A man who needs "shiny and new" to feel manly isn't much of a man...you should forgive me for saying....
Write on, sister.......
Gala
Terry--- Thanks. I guess as long as something good came out of it...
Slug--- Your "Feminist Love" took the words I wanted to write right out of my mouth. No fair!!! *grin*
Whoops...
Guppy--- (who emailed me once upon a time and then never again...*grin*)
Your "flap and purge" (did I get it right?) was perfect and realistic.
You are the kind of guy we are all looking to meet I think...
Gala - Thanks for the 'heads up' on the file saving situation. Luckily I have everything on floppy but this recent scare was a good reminder for us all about how dangerous it is to rely on technology. I'm going to start printing my stuff out routinely as well...
-Nadia
bk - danger ahead was perfect...flirty, even
guppy - flap and purge is wonderful. that scene...it's so heard to be anything more than superficial. you illustrated it well.
megs - what rhymes with happy...good job. (and apparently it doesn't count as happy if you're fighting it all the way)
also:
megs, BK, and it dosent matter - thank you very much. it was something i toyed with for a while and then "yeilding" and it just erupted. fabulous. :-)
also: i have problems with drug-induced happiness, as well. one of my favorite artists is fiona apple, and she's sad sad sad. as is tori amos. there's something healing about being sad.
To the love of your life
Darling,
I love you. Three little words that mean so much, yet seem to say so little. The way I feel about you, I need other words, bigger words, words that don't get used so often.
I need a word for the heart bursting joy that sets my head spinning whenever I think of you. I need another for the warm ocean of contentment I feel lapping around me when I think of the years we will have together in the future. And another for the determination I feel when I think of you - determination to make you so happy you will be mine forever. And the words for the desire you raise in me....
But the only words I have are "I love you".
I love you.
Angel Form Above (written for Paula)
How I long for thy sweet embrace,
To see the beauty on thy face,
To caress thy silky hair,
For never before hath I seen a maiden so fair.
Thou are my one true love,
For thou art mine angel from above.
Devin -- 'you asked' ... oh god.... you made me cry at work -- lucky no one caught me! (sigh) ok, the ugly truth is just about everything nearly brought tears to my eyes today!
I've no real right to be blue, other than the fact I've had a sinus infection for over a week now, and tired is about as good a description as you can get of me..... I'm in urgent need of some TLC over here.
Other good stuff..... Terry 'gone' ... wow and as for 'untitled' a girl can wish .... I was wishing you (and devin) where writing for me....
Gala -- 'yielding' .. loved the last lines.... everyone, Gala indeed is the best fairy god mother, she sent me this box of goodies -- looked like she had brought out a stationary store... what a treasure trove!!
Gup 'flap and purge'..... indeed you are the master.
dee
deevaa - exactly. on being my hero - we're women, not invalids. we just enjoy being pampered. good job.
Deevaa: Two really nice ones. Thank You!
Frosted One: Tom Petty has been my guy lately for some reason. Then theres always Sting!
BK~ Wow...'Van Gogh, Eric Clapton and You'.....wonderful. Starry Starry Night is my favorite painting, and I love the line:
"Your words like Van Gogh stars
Spinning round in my minds eye"
great analogy.
t.