From: it dosent matter <BR>
Date: 29 September 2000<P>

Gala <BR>
      with regards to warmth ...  was truly warm and welcome  thank you
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From: slug<BR>
Date: 29 September 2000<P>

it dosent matter: the beauty...interesting thought...
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From: slug<BR>
Date: 29 September 2000<P>

first and foremost: kirk, i am so flattered. I don't write much short prose, and that was a peice i threw out there just to see. how wonderful!<BR>
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and to be surrounded by such masterful work! it's a pity that i'm surrounded by real life work and not enough time to read/write. but i feel i atrophy if i don't, so i'll squeak by - and everyone keep posting so there will be wonderful things to read (besides finance reports and fashion show s*#$) :-)<BR>
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also: BK: i feel, somehow, that my point was lost. suicide is viscious, but this was definitely metaphorical. i'm working on something to be as impacting - but different - and i'm rambling so i'll stop before i lose my track.<BR>
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anyway - congrats to all the front page picks, and thank you kirk, and wow...it's not even october yet. have fun on your trip!
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From: dj will - [email-masked]<BR>
Date: 29 September 2000<P>

entitled: pessimistic lover<BR>
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love is dangerous it can make a grown man weep.<BR>
try saying it, i love you, that is, stand in front of a mirror and look at your eyes when you do.  emotion? hell no.<BR>
do you laugh like i, or am i the wanderer wordsworth talks about, no sense of belonging, in love with the idea of being in love.  divorce happens you know, more so now than ever, so where was that love that existed, why havent i found it, why does cupid always shoot me but cant hit the one i love, why why why?<BR>
i thought of her today, only once but s far its lasted all day.  am i in love? how do i know.  who cares.<BR>
love is dangerous.  its true, its true.<BR>

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From: dj will - [email-masked]<BR>
Date: 29 September 2000<P>

entitled: pessimistic lover<BR>
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love is dangerous it can make a grown man weep.<BR>
try saying it, i love you, that is, stand in front of a mirror and look at your eyes when you do.  emotion? hell no.<BR>
do you laugh like i, or am i the wanderer wordsworth talks about, no sense of belonging, in love with the idea of being in love.  divorce happens you know, more so now than ever, so where was that love that existed, why havent i found it, why does cupid always shoot me but cant hit the one i love, why why why?<BR>
i thought of her today, only once but so far its lasted all day.  am i in love? how do i know.  who cares.<BR>
love is dangerous.  its true, its true.<BR>

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From: dj will - [email-masked]<BR>
Date: 29 September 2000<P>

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i asked you if you loved me,<BR>
 and you didnt flick an eye,<BR>
i asked you if you loved me you said<BR>
"married you didnt i"
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From: Abdul. [email-masked]<BR>
Date: 29 September 2000<P>

<BR>
 first of all let me tell you a little bit of my story, I am 21 years old and I just found my first love that is the  reason I am in this page,<BR>
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I realy like your website and I alweys visit,my comments is if you would add more real love letters that will be very help full to me and I guess some other people also,<BR>
thank you very much.   Abdul
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From: B.K.<BR>
Date: 29 September 2000<P>

Michael: 'Horses Dream' was fun.<BR>
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Terry and it dosent matter: Guys, I have this problem with your poems. I almost forget to breathe when I read them...LOL Please put a warning on them.<BR>
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Gala: Wonderful way to welcome Fall!<BR>
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slug: Congratch on your pick..actually, I was thinking that one of the Viscious boys committed suicide..was it Sid?<BR>
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deevaa: I can't imagine you without pictures on your walls. You create such beautiful images to be surrounded with.
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From: Megs<BR>
Date: 29 September 2000<P>

Wow...the front page made it before October even had a chance :)  What a GREAT surprise.  And have fun on your trip Kirk.<BR>
Great selections...Go Miss Dee...and everyone else.  It was a great month for works I would say.<BR>
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From: Megs<BR>
Date: 29 September 2000<P>

Terry-  No words for your last sub.  Just tears and that feeling for when you have read something that makes you catch your breath.  You are a wonderful special guy...<BR>
Wow.  <BR>
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Gala-  Loved "Warmth".  Love Autumn.  Captured it delightfully. 
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From: slug<BR>
Date: 29 September 2000<P>

mira: "I think I'd Like to Stay" - as someone who recently went through a health scare, and both pushed everyone away and desperately clung to them for support - you're poem is beautiful, and whoever it was meant for is truly blessed - because sticking it out is the most important thing you can do. i can't say enough good things about you and this poem. wonderful....wonderful...
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From: slug<BR>
Date: 29 September 2000<P>

bk - i liked united. nice, simple, sweet. perfect.<BR>
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megs - i enjoyed afternoon forecast - it's interesting to see the way other people shape their poetry. the line breaks are so influential in the meaning of the lines, you did well :-)
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From: terry<BR>
Date: 29 September 2000<P>

BK~ Wow, do you ever write one heckuva love letter.                                                                                                                 Megs~ Thank you...you are much too kind. I was trying to stretch my writing into a direction I had never attempted before.<BR>
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t.
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From: B.K.<BR>
Date: 29 September 2000<P>

Megs: I liked 'afternoon forecast' as well. Lovely weather today huh..lol You just can't get them any better than this.
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From: B.K.<BR>
Date: 29 September 2000<P>

wing: 'long before I know' is beautiful. Please write more! The way to her heart is through her mind.
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From: B.K.<BR>
Date: 29 September 2000<P>

Terry: Thanks, but I don't put you in a trance, and then make you quack like a duck, like you do me...LOL
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From: Angel<BR>
Date: 29 September 2000<P>

*WOW* Congratulations everyone *SMILE*<BR>
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Kirk, have a great time in GERMANY!<BR>
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HAPPY FALL EVERYBODY BUT DEEVAA :)<BR>
Happy Spring or whatever to her:)
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From: Michael (quick)<BR>
Date: 29 September 2000<P>

Terry ~ Are you ok? "Dancing naked in the rain" worries me. You don't have a blood disease do you?<BR>
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B.K. ~ "Never enough" It never is. But sometimes it's all we have.<BR>
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Megs ~ "Afternoon forecast" Hopefully it's a good evening too. =)
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