Michael~ thanks for your concern...'Dancing Naked...' will be part of something larger, and I was having trouble portraying emotional honesty and truth at perhaps its hardest moment between two people deeply in love. I am touched at your concern and apologize that I neglected to add a disclaimer when submitting that one.
terry
wow! so many great poems over breakfast!
it dosent matter: i feel redundant, but of course- "loving you" is beautiful
and
Teri: "a forever" is wonderfully written, as is "as i watch" lovely lovely
Echoloacation: haven't seen anything from you in a while, but i'm VERY glad that i get to read it this morning - it's just so...good. (think voice inflection on that - it's much more meaningful than it sounds...like really good dessert - you say good, because you can't think of another word. although, as mark twain said "the difference between the right word and almost the right word is like the difference between lightning and a lightning bug."
Guppy: also redundant...do you write anything BAD? (not that i wish to see bad from you, but it's seems too good for someone to be consistently impressive to read)
and Me - "Scorpio" - hearts dipped in lava. exactly what love is like. exactly. :-)
gala love: your ramble
who was the veiled girlyl of biblical times???
twas' leah, who lot married. but he wanted to marry rachel, which he eventually got to do after her father, the dork let him when lot started getting totally rich and rachel and leahs father didn't.
so his papa in law thought he would trick him, said he was gonna marry rachel, but instead clothed leah in a veil.
So you took her away from me just to see if it will hurt. You always do that, and I should have known better but who would of thought that after 2 years of a marriage full of lies from you, you would be the one to kidnap our daughter i raised for a year and a half. She needs me and that is why she is not here. But should I blame myself because I'm the one that left you? I'm beside myself and the only thing I can think of is how to hurt you as bad as I possibly can. So you met the other guy I'm with. Go on buddy. Life does go on whether you want to belive it or not.
You have hurt me beyond repair
You have stolen from me
You have lied to me for so long
you controlled me and I let you
but not anymore, you will get yours
and i will make sure of that.
But this is another lesson in life to be learned
another test I am being put through, but i always come
out with flying colors.
I always told you, if you hurt me once bad enough, i will hurt you 10 times worse. I learned how to hurt people from the best and you are in for it.
Would really appreciate a search section. Can't seem to refind poems with out having to go through so many lists. Tiring and time consuming. Other than this consideration, love the site and poetry. It is very much appreciated.
Slug...BK...Micheal...
Thanks for the compliments on what I considered a silly thought jotted out. It is always a good night with him *grin*
BK- The love letter was just divine. Perfect.
Gup- Last lines of "Inward/Outward" were wonderful and just...liked 'em lots. That's all I can say *grin*
The Scorpio moon has been running rampant these last two days here. It's been so hot I thought I was going to have to call the bucket brigade today..LOL
It dosent matter: 'loving you' and 'the beauty that is you'. If you don't stop it I will be stalking your dreams...LOL
Echolocation: 'Dream With Me', so lovely. I loved that one!
Me: 'Scorpio' caught the heat too! LOL
Guppy:'inward/outward', even he was using the 'D' word. Wonderful!
John: 'one cool night' was hot
slug: then comes forth with her blissful animal behavior. Man this place is cooking! 'The First Taste' was MMMMM!
Megs: has been at it for days now! It's warm in here.
Terry: But thank God, I do have aloe for that one! 'like honey like aloe' was just pure fire! WHEW, need a fan!
Wow, you guys, keep this up and Kirk will be at two million in about a week or two...LOL
Terry: Darn your hyde, you just burned down the house! LOL
'Cadence to my Soul', I bow to the Master!
it doesent matter: 'another love letter', Heavy Sigh! So beautiful, you need to put "Need Oxygen" warnings on that one. You and Terry both! LOL
BK~ I had to say that 'Cries and Whispers' struck such a chord in my mind that it still vibrates. You put into words a feeling that has lingered there for a while now. thanks...
t.
Thank you Kirk, deevaa, terry, and Galadrial, and congrats to everyone on the front page, back page, sides and in-between, this place is such a goOooOOod read. With school, work, & my server being down, I'm just getting back online. Now... off to my favorite place to read and chill, Here! (with all of the hot romance poetry & prose around the Blender, maybe chill's not the word?)