by the way -- John, thankyou for your kind words on (if I may) it was one of those poems that came out of the blue in the midst of writers block.....sadly I've sunk back into the doom and gloooooom of the pit.
oh well, its lucky I like to paint!!
dee
wish I could have writers block like that.
Gaka: First of all I am honored to have two poems entered into your garden of poetry. For anyone that has not seen it, its is a must!
http://www.geocities.com/galadrialsgarden/garden_menu.html
I want to scream SEE ME! Something like the Who, lol, but you should see all of it, for everything there is just exquisite.
Kevin: I want some of the atmospheric conditions and water you have been drinking lately. What wonderful poems, I loved every one of them. It's been a lovely day for poems.
Terry: Look outside your door, women lined up all holding a copy of your poem.'May I paint you?'.lol, wow, will that one have impact. (can I cut line)
bk
Its 2:30 am and I can't spell GALA! Forgive me please!!! LOL
it doesn't matter:'the path', seeing you caught in minds picture show, balancing to the tune of your heart. I loved that. I still go around with 'a sharp little piece of broken sound' glued to my soul'. More more please!
hey people............
i need some prayers??? i've been coming here for going on two years now...........maybe more..........????? which for me IS long term. But, i have a bad infection in my ears right now, not a regular ear infection........but i don't know, and the dr's don't know yet, if i'm ever going to be able to hear normally again, which to me, very much sucks!!!!!!!! I've already been basically deaf in my left ear for the past month. I can't hear much, and my right ear is okay, but still some plugage going on, but it's killing me this off kilter thing, and i feel moments of insanity where i just want to dig in my ear and somehow make it all better even though i know that won't work.....so if you guys can pray for me, i don't want to lose my hearing.
sarah
Kev?
wow......artistic wheaties? The last few have been lovely, and succinct in your own fashion...you are truly on top of your game...a little confidence and you would me truly might, my friend.......
Gala
kevin and terry < ** sighs ** standing ovation ** and the crowd goes wild ** > reading your new subs would melt an ice princess in Antarctica . I think Fall stirs up as much passion and romance as Spring? (Summer and Winter aren't so bad, either) Wonderful writings, beautiful.
I blew the last sub of course.......mea culpa.....if you're reading it, the line is you will be beautiful....but I NEEDED to write that one.....and now having done so, will have a cigarette........
Yup.....this poetry stuff is awful dry, ain't it?
Gala
Hey People!
**Frosted One**-"Is This Our Final Goodbye"- very good! so sad to lose a friend....Esp. this way. I'm sorry that you had to go through this yet once again. You know I love ya and i'm here for ya.:-)
Kare Bare
Gala~ & BK~ WOW, your art theme offerings far outshined my attempt. Major kudos... And Gala, I never mentioned it but 'You Too' was one of the most delightful, fun to read pieces ever......ever.....lol, thanks.
Dee, slug, Madison, and everyone. thank you again. I know the quality of your talents from the wonderful reading here, and I am pleased you liked 'May I Paint You'. Very much so...
Sarah~ there's not much worse a feeling that to have your balance out of sorts and fuzzy hearing. Best wishes, and you will be in my prayers.
Frosted One~ You too are in my prayers for your loss.
it doesn't matter~ Your writing continues to amaze me, sir. 'the path' is one I printed out to keep. It was beautifully crafted and had an emotional impact that blew me away...completely. You put to words something I have never been able to do with this one. Thank you.
Dee~ I am in utter agreement with john. 'If I May' was a wonderfully soothing read. With quality such as that why worry about quantity..
terry