From: BK<BR>
Date: 17 November 2000<P>

You know Gup, I would have let this slide but since you are right at the top of the page today I have to say that there is an English burpless variety thats excellent eating and  (Terry) would be great pole vauting equipment as well...LOL LOL <BR>
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bk
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From: Jose:superiorgenius00@aol.com<BR>
Date: 17 November 2000<P>

My Mistake<BR>
<BR>
I am here now,<BR>
just thinking about you,<BR>
Thinking about our wonderful<BR>
times together,<BR>
like i use to,<BR>
As a tear runs down my face,<BR>
i think "how shallow being with you"<BR>
But then spontaneously have,<BR>
one quick falsh to my mind,<BR>
the mistake was mine<BR>
So ill shall live with the guilt,<BR>
From now until something obstacle,<BR>
comes into my mind.<BR>
<BR>
<BR>
By:Jose <BR>

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From: B.K.<BR>
Date: 17 November 2000<P>

Who has news about Gala??? Please post as we miss her and want her to know that she is in our thoughts and prayers and want her back soon.<BR>
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bk
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From: The Hobbits<BR>
Date: 17 November 2000<P>

Deep wood rumours abound this fine day,<BR>
And I will share news, if I may...<BR>
The wizards did magic upon our lady's eyes.<BR>
And it went very well, even better as time goes by.<BR>
'Yon elven is chipper and very good...<BR>
Thanks to prayer and magic from the deep wood...
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From: scqueen<BR>
Date: 17 November 2000<P>

bk ~ "Mind Fire" is absolutely my new favorite thing you've ever written. 
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From: kimmy<BR>
Date: 17 November 2000<P>

So how are all you freaks out there?
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From: HakanS thehaki@hotmail.com<BR>
Date: 17 November 2000<P>

Hey?? Has anyone read my prose-poem "You in Me"??? I really want to know what you think...so that i can have some motivation to go on or give it all up. Can someone read it and tell me what he/she thinks about it?
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From: Nadia (ms.nadia@mail.com)<BR>
Date: 17 November 2000<P>

HakanS - <BR>
<BR>
I've never seen any negative feedback on this forum, so you're not likely to have anyone tell you to give up writing!  On the contrary, this is a very nurturing, encouraging circle of writers.  If no one comments on your poem, it could be that the title just didn't catch the right person's eye or that your poem didn't speak them in a particularly poignant way.  But that doesn't mean it's not good.<BR>
<BR>
I initially skipped over "You in Me" but went back to read it after seeing your request for feedback.  I think the imagery is very strong and captures the confusion of love rather well.<BR>
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But the bottom line is that you shouldn't listen to what I or anyone else says - keep on writing!  Remember, we ultimately write for ourselves, not others.<BR>
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-Nadia
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From: Michael (missing)<BR>
Date: 17 November 2000<P>

Gala ~ I hope you recover soon!<BR>
All ~ I'm sorry I haven't commented. Too Busy.
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From: DAve Goodman<BR>
Date: 17 November 2000<P>

Hey, i know there are a lot of things to read, especially for those of you who have been here for a goodly time,  but i'm a shelfish evil person that doesn't trust that his stuff is actually read.  Just curious if it is.  I don't grave coments, just the knowledge that someone reads it.<BR>
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Thanx<BR>
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PS&gt; Fairy God Mother?  Will you ever get back to me about those stories and poems i sent you over the summer :)<BR>
i'm only messin with ya.  Say hi to carol for me if she should drop in anytime in the next few days, i'm somewhat home bound, and a unable to visit.
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