Great place you've got! New to your site but am hoping to get some super inspiration and play awhile. Thanks for the fodder-food for thought...interesting poetry to say the least!
Dave Goodman ~ "a morning in the sun" reminds me a little of something a long time ago. "have you seen my used to be" has an interesting rhythm to it. Whatever it was, it's gone now. I know that feeling well.
Ali ~ I have to comment on "when" -- but I must also bump it. The advice you haven't asked for that I give anyway(worthless as always): Don't ask why. Just remember. Then let it blur into a forget.
Terry, dee, gala, all ~ I find I have nothing to say when poems are sensual. Doesn't mean I don't enjoy them. I just have nothing to say.
bk ~ "Mind fire" I like the analogy. Striking sparks.
Nadia ~ "The red baloon(reprise)" There's always duct tape. And band-aids with little cookie monsters on them applied with kisses and lots of fanfare. <smile>
Guppy ~ guster rules. Dylan rules. Audrey rules. You seem to be a man of good taste. ;-)
to: Every one
Thank you for all of your positive comments. I have been dealing with some difficult times lately, and the friends I have made here have kept me going. I haven't posted much lately due to work and worries, but never think for a moment I don't remember all of you in my prayers. Bear with me, friends, rumors of my death are greatly exaggerated.
This week's favs:
touching the truth
touch
in the eyes of the walking wounded
5AM
before the kiss
0-100
sadness
good night
cucumber bliss
to get back
tomorrow
everything in question
Dave Goodman & Hakan~ I make a point to read all posts, though I seldom have time to comment every time I read. So rest assured, your work is being read. I'm sure others have the same habits I do, and I usually try to comment en masse so as not to be a pest on the board. The depth and variety of talent here is astounding. Keep posting...
terry