2 Elaina~ thank you so very much...
A breakdown is an old poem I posted 20th of december but without a title and Now I gave it one
She is a poem about me being pretty sorry for the pain I have inflicted on someone else
But it explains That I didn't want to hurt and that I was also falling...
And Take him or leave him..well that's an offer I got from my first true love..and i don't know what to do...I'll let you know in some poems..you'll read between the lines i know you will.....
Thankyou and a happy new year~
Once upon a time ago,
from afar you came to me,
I wish I knew what I now know,
that you and I are meant to be!
Now that several years have past,
we have finally come to be,
a couple that will forever last,
now it is plain for all to see!
You and I we are a team,
we are the best at what we do,
together we can build our dreams,
all of this I will do with you!
Only time will tell what tomorrow brings,
and every second I spend with you,
makes me want to shout and sing,
and, of course, fall more in love with you!
When finally our wedding day comes,
I will be the happiest woman alive,
let all the air fill my lungs,
and deeper in love I will dive!
When our first baby arrives,
a part of you and a part of me,
I cannot wait to see your eyes,
as they are filled with love and glee!
As we raise our baby well,
you and I together will be,
the proudest parents with stories to tell,
full of joy you just wait and see!
When we grow old and gray,
we will still have each other,
and beside you I will lay,
a very happy wife and mother!
In the end I will have lived,
the most wonderful life with you,
to my family I will give,
my memories of me and you!
Hey All,
Today is already tommorow in NZ so don't forget to flood Miz Dee's mailbox with homecoming messages!
Welcome home Dee....we missed you lots!
Gala
Hey all~ I havn't been here since Friday and it fills up pretty quickly. I love taking the time and reading everyones submissions along with all of their comments. Happy New Year to Everyone...
I read a lot of creations today that I really liked and if I tried to comment on all, you'd be reading all day!!
Peter~ 'Now I Know' was very powerful and full of meaning...I loved it.
Me aka Niki~ 'A Breakdown' & 'New Year' were absolutley amazing. I felt the words come alive as I was reading. You have so much talent.
Gala~ 'When the Heart Decides' The truth has never been said more beautifully.
Slug~ 'Della' brought me to tears. The 1 year anniversary of my great grandmothers death is coming up and your words hit so close to my heart. Thank you.
Rodney~ 'Distorted Memories' seems as though it was from first person experience, because it is...Everything that I write and submitt is from first hand... Thank you..
Kevin~ THanks for the advice about the sound card...but I work with a little lap top...not enough memory or room to do all of the things that I would love to do with it!! Thank you though...
Again...Happy New Year to you all and the best wishes possible to all!!
Brandy
Quakeadelic ~ 'Awake and Rise' was so refreshing. It reminded me of playing in the rain as a child, without a care in the world. Maybe I'll try it again next time I need
to let off some steam (if it will ever rain in CA - we need it!) Thanks for the great imagery.
B.K. ~ I guess you have the right to get 'mad' too, just seems so uncharacteristic of you! Hope all is well :-)
Elaina~ 'One More Chance' and 'I Just Know' were wonderfull...'One More Chance' kinda struck a nerve, with me...Very good stuff.
Love and snow cones, Ali
Ali~I really loved 'arms of grace' it really made me think.
xoxo
elaina
Ali~ 'Arms of Grace' is really wonderful!
scqueen~ All three, 'Partners', 'Just For Looks' and 'Games' were a delight to read in their simple depth. Very good...
terry