way to go Misti and Paul.
Please publish my poem;
"Your love hits me like a blender hits my hand,
I miss you every day like a hole in my head" Lord Byron II
oh Sarah ~ 'bath' is wonderful...
oh, and slug!!!
forgot to mention one last sappy seventies group (and a selected song)
Who could forget BREAD? And the song "Baby I'm a Want You?"
<giggle>
Deevaa- "Smooth" I thin kwe all like the sound of that one!
-Jenna-
hi this is parikshit i just wanted to give ul a message that plz dont make fun of love and flurt with anyone this has happened to me too so i just wanted to request youl
plz dont make fum or flurt
mail address=lovemebaby4@lovemail.com
hi this is a poem for my loe who flurted me
you were the one whom i would
but you denied this fact and got lost
you never had a slidgest idea of my love
because my love for u was as gentle as love
my heart often that you would know it soon
if u dont realize in the morning
you shall in the noon
i shall continu to love you
even if you dont........
love me a bit
by
parikshit
hi this is a poem for my loe who flurted me
my love .... my life
you were the one whom i would
but you denied this fact and got lost
you never had a slidgest idea of my love
because my love for u was as gentle as love
my heart often that you would know it soon
if u dont realize in the morning
you shall in the noon
i shall continu to love you
even if you dont........
love me a bit
by
parikshit
KEV and DEE - actually - it's a cd that i made from my stepfather's cds and songs i downloaded. but i love it and will probably seek out the cds you have.
oh - and fair warning to everyone - i'm about to start studying the origins of chivalry and courtship. just be forewarned of unbelievable mushiness. my icky-sweet poems might come well after gala's cut off date of friday :-)
Slug; Never give up the icky sweet, mushy stuff, I love it..lol lol. I think the ickys are great. Sigh..lol
Oh yes and not icky in any way 'Electricute' was just great. Loved it, makes me smile every time I think of it.
Kev; Your 'icky valentine' made me laugh so hard. I love all your writing, but it's great to see you let loose..lol
Sarah; 'morning erotica' and 'bath' are both wonderful writing. Good going woman.
scqueen: 'aromatherapy' and 'green meanies'..skin is a wonderful smell, and jealousy, don't you just hate that feeling? I sure do. nice work.
Deevaa; 'Smooth' is wonderful.
Ali; 'My Heartbeat,' I loved your icky sweet too...lol
Guppy: 'chocolate cheese,' your icky sweet made me laugh as
well.. fun stuff.
Stands; good to see your work again, it's wonderful, keep it coming
TJ; saw one by you and then off again, If you are reading us come back and give us some more.
Angel: 'scarlet lips,' loved the line, probabilities have always bored her. Good one.
Riggs: 'Color Girl' was well done.
Gala; Congratulations on the pages I saw, wonderful work. Just don't forget us. Have been missing your writings here
Terry; Same to you Darlin, have been missing your work here as well. Love everything I have seen of yours as usual.
Sorry it's been so long, the winter blahs is what I will blame it on. I still read so don't stop, not even with the icky sweets please...LOL LOL This is my favorite place to read.
Jack; COME BACK JACK!
bk
B.K.~ Glad you liked it!
bk - thanks - electricute was...funny to write (I was in economics)
and - Jack is in Taiwan with his wife and daughter - visiting the in-laws. he will come back ,but i don't think he has email for a while. i'm sure he'll have piles and piles of poems to post. and i'm waiting with baited breath...
I was behind, But read all the new ones
And There are so many good things here, Here I go:
2 Leela~"No longer a child" That happend to me
And I also tagged along and Stayed with him
But that was one of the biggest mistakes I made...
I really liked the poem.. Good work
2 Intentionally Withheld~ "My existence" WOW
Great poem
2 Angeli~ "my butterfly"
I once met somebody and I thought he was my other half
But it seemed Like I was the only one that felt It was meant to be Because We just couldn't be together in this world and time
Loved it..
2 Elaina~ "Show me" Liked it a lot
2 Amy~ "you are my everything"
It explains totally what your love means to you,everything!:)
Love it
2 Deevaa~ "White canvas"
This one I realy like, nice!!
2 Kevin~ All of your short poems say so much
They are nice
2 Sarah~ "Bath" STEAMY hehe:)
Wow, wow...
2 Kathleen~"once I loved a sailor"
A very sad poem, I'm sorry
The end was good!
2 Scqueen~"aromatherapy"
My god I loved it
I've been there
I Love to kiss in necks and smell the smells
They linger around in my head forever
Great poem!
and "chasing glass"
Hehehe, Nice one!
Kim~ "unhealed Heart of Mine"
LOVED IT, Forgetting is soo difficult
I had a few poems about forgetting and would read them every night...Maybe I'll post them
and "Pocket full of stars" Great one
2 B.~ "I like the scenry" Nice, nice!
There a lot more, but I didn't have the time to Comment on all of them! Sorry!
Good work