A Test Of Fate
Listen to my words,
for they come from my heart.
I will never give up on you,
I have loved you from the start.
We have overcome so many trials,
and it has been a test of fate.
I know exactly where I belong.
and it is with you my Soulmate.
God has seperated us now,
but only for a while.
Until we can conquer this
one last test and trial.
We truly belong together,
and this I am sure.
We have had so many ups and downs
that only our love could endure.
I love you so much sweetheart,
and I offer you my life.
one day we will unite,
as we become husband and wife.
Our souls have intertwined
to become as one,
and we will be together
when all is said and done.
So my love keep these words
right next to your heart.
For if you truly believe in us,
we will never be apart.
Close your eyes and invision
the biggest and brightest star,
and know in your heart
I will always love you,
even from afar.
Rhet, How passionate, how beautiful, how sad was your "Standing, in a Moment!" I loved it!! Sometimes, I just shake my head and smile, thinking to myself, "Ain't she smart?" Hee-hee!!
Rhet~
Standing, in a Moment was breath-taking...Each line was so beautifully constructed...Damn good job...*smile*
Love and jaded thunder, Ali
Red Fox Puppy:
I really enjoyed the power of your "A Test Of Fate," but your name distracts me. Are you a red-fox puppy, or, "Red Foxx, a new beginning??"
(Please...no eyes rolling...I'm NOT trying to be funny!)
BK and sweetness~posting black and blue was kinda hard, its almost like walking naked through a crowd. Baring your ASSests, no pun intended. I just hope if anyone here relates to it, they do something quicker than i did
Wow...do I need to proofread before I push that little button! I am terrible at typo's - and it doesn't help that I don't read before I submit. Sorry if it didn't flow because I missed some mistakes. To be honest, I haven't been satisfied with a post of mine in over a month. Oh, well, I never said I was any good.
Thank you anyways, Just Some Girl. I know you are just saying all them purty words to make me feel less like a big dork. We watched Almost Famous (for about the 6th time) tonight. What an awesome movie. I was born, just when I should have been 18 years old! I am too much a 70's personality to have been born in '75. All those drugs (I may not have survived puberty if I really had been around)...all that great music - I was just born too late. Woe is me.
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