Edmundo Daudi, about My Sunshine:
"I am pink, as a pig, a billboard for Stalin.
Tonight's dreams that I had, were to ask her to dance,
they've been ruined by sunshine"
These lines are absolute genius.
hollywoodfox, about i want to kiss you in art galleries:
I remember reading some of your work the last time I came on here. This is wonderful. I am not very good at writing short, powerful poems, but if I was, this is what I would like to write.
bp, about young love (stay):
This makes me miss your writing terribly. I hope you submit some new poems soon.