By lilla
Date: 2007 May 15
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[[2007.05.15.06.58.5057]]

aftertaste

"have you ever
wanted something so badly
went hungry, crazy to get there
like
throw everything in the air
and runaway to some strange paradise
leave behind all that has been said and done
perfecting love’s forgiveness
can you imagine
that tender starving kisz
that painfully sweet blitzkrieg makin' luv
so good, so bad
it brings us both to tears
how about explain to me
this love and desire
that grows huge and wild
each night, each day, every single time
what's this then
a dark, hurting silhoutte
of myself walking away
and why didn’t you baby
ever ever just once
try to brave it
by asking me to stay."




afterthought***
~~~this is not the way this poem is supposed to end, the last 7 lines were misfits.  or may be then, the first 17 were surreal, the next ones was the way twas really meant to be.