take yur lip and stretch it over yur head?... ya think thats painfull?... nah that aint painful ...whats painfull is if you were to .... umm well take yur....hmmmm ... now if you was too.... heck ya know... stretching yur lip over yur head would be pretty painfull at that...
jack
hmm pull one purl two... gotta remember that...
jack
"pull one purl two" thats what moma always tought me.
let me tell you something Jon I know how you feel
they seem so perfect at first and then out of no where
they do things that make you think it isnt love but some
thing else take ophie for example I thot I loved her but now I know it wasnt love but lust she is playing games I dont like games games are stoopid
shark... go home, yur moma misses ya
jack
jack I enjoy this time with you
like I told you last night moma is dead and do I need to
keep reminding you that I am not this shark charecter?
Ophie are you there? Are you reading all of this? You compared me to a shark once. I think you said that because Ive got bite.
Okay women HAVE called me things like shark, is that what you mean? OB said similer things. (That was my nick-name for her). She said I have bite and Im coniverus. Im not sure what-all that means but she seemed hot and bothered at the time.
BK~~ Comparing love to hockey... Yeap, you would only see it from a guy. heh
;-)
im so not buying into any of this shark , you were a boring individual before and so much more so now, please just go home to yur moma k?
gee...new day, new war
you can't blame people for being morons, but you can blame them for showing off about it
jackrhyme, if that is your real name, that was directed at you...you fill a much needed void here
i've taken to writing poetry in c code format now...nobody gets it, and it doesn't work, but at least i'm trying
someday i'll get back in tune with romantic turmoil
Stephen: The place was full of men but I think the only way a woman could get attention is if she had on tight jeans and wore hockey puck perfume...ha (I'm kidding) We had a bunch of Canadians behind us singing to us and begging us to go drinking with them...it was hysterical I got beer poured in my hair and they called it Canadian Herbal Essence. I never laughed so hard in my life at what goes on at hockey games..ha hahahah thats why your comparison was so cool.
Mr. Rhyme? No, HoosierDaddy does not need to go home to Moma. I am his Moma and that is a title I am not comfortable with. He is better off on his own. He is home for Spring Break. I'll be glad when he goes back to campus.
shark you are a true waste of time
who are you calling shark now? am I still the shark? see, Ive been here for the past ten hours because I have no life no women. You are married? why are you still here? if you are happy you spend a lot of time barking up the wrong tree, jack.
Jon~
She Annoys Me is the greatest...I enjoyed reading it very much...Well done!! *smile*
Love and unseen reason, Ali
Just Some Girl,
I am glad to see you post. I simply adore you! I liked the moment you created for us in Helen's Angels.
I think it is time for me to write another of my colorful devotions to you. It has been too long since I let my hair down and got creative.
Is this a now a site for plugging our favorite college teams? I see all this Hoosier stuff...what else could it be but a B-ball reference (surely it isn't an attempt at humor - Hoosier Daddy)? If Kirk has turned this place into a sports bar, I must give praise to my Lady Vols!
Bye Now,
Rhet-a-licious
bk,
i know what you're saying about the honorable fight. my take on it is that the heart of this place is in the works that are posted, and not in the banter of the board. flamers get their kicks from being obnoxious anonymous cowards...and they are rampant everywhere there is an open exchange of words on the internet. every inflamatory comment leaves the flamer laughing and others pissed off. they play on the ideas of respect and honor.
fighting the good fight is fine, but be aware that it provides fuel, and it cannot be won by any means short of banning people from the site.
i fight by shunning
gup
Rhet-
Thank you! I adore you, too! Your work is among the best postings on this site!
Gupster ~ I miss you. Hope all is well. The shame of the eedjits on this board is that they keep your writing away from those of us who love it. But, I do understand...
And, H.D. ~ Mr. Rhyme does know it all.
Hoosier~I'm ashamed that someone a year older then me spells worse than an infant in pampers.
Meant to subtitle "Unrequited" as a poem from the viewpoint of another character...I'm writing a piece of fiction right now where the narrator is male, and I sometimes get stuck in his voice, and en up writing through his eyes.
Sweetness~
Unrequited...wow, is this good writing...I so know what you mean...Excellent writing...*smile*
Love and unseen reason, Ali
Sweetness~
I figured that Unrequited was from another viewpoint, from having read your other works...
Dear Holly, Although I haven't felt like writing for a while I thought I would add a few lines to your rhyme, hope you like 'em.
I taste your words and watch them dance,
As youe lips begin this tail of romance
Of maidens and warriors, kings and queens
And nightly voyages through many a dream
To wonder what was in times long past
In delight and hope my dream will last
Under luminous glow, there/s a full moon trance
This dream's to real to be written off as chance
So come, take my hand, and we'll set sail this night
On love's great ocean, follow destiny's light
That's all for now, Wordley (RH)
Oh Gup that was very well spoken! You are indeed missed and so Darlin, put your worthy words to page and help slay this BEAST of many heads. (Tanqueray, R.H., the message is to you both as well kind sirs.)
bk
...and speaking of the best, your latest, Rhet (Hot Pepper) is great, though I must confess that it baffles me. It is a labyrith of well turned phrases, the meaning of which, at first, I think I am aware only to breast the curve of a new line and finding only mystery...
...hint?
Just a few thoughts...
TJ-Ocean Envy is great. I miss the ocean too.
Saffron - great name. I really liked Dagora . Interesting and purposeful.
Stephen - The Bleeding Glass is awesome. Put that education to use with all those fancy words.
purpleblots - naked is SO real. Well done.
eat u sleep u dream u - la danse macabre is amazing. Bitter and sad, but damned good.
jack - cold... sweetly sings to me.
Holly...I tried to get clever and add to the board poem, but I just didn't think I could stay between the lines.
Night, Night,
Jen
Ah...
Just Some Girl,
I think that 'hot pepper' makes sense only to me. I wrote it ABOUT person A, but really wrote it FOR person B. How cloudy is that? All my little mental crafting has even me wondering
Thank you for reading, dear girl.
Fennifer
Vishal, Kylie & Vi ~ Thanks for you recent comments. All of you, I enjoy your work very much. Vishal ~ Your random thoughts are very thought provoking.
I have to agree with Gup on this. Shuning is clearly the answer. If more people shuned, the world would be a better, safer, place. Hopefuly, we can soon have you're Words hear on this sight. I cant wait to read them.
Ali~Thank you I'm glad you liked it! That mean's a lot coming from you, I have always deeply admired your work and I espcially love "What I Really Meant" one of your older works. I swear I had tears in my eyes.
Take care and all sweet stuff.
-Jon