Oft Felt~behind these eyes of mine... and i was lost and a wonder'n... were wonderful! I loved every word, every line. Great job!
Rhetoric~To My Darling was so sweet. I really enjoyed reading it!
I have enjoyed all the latest poems, they've all be wonderful. I would take the time to tell each one of you how great but I just got home from work and I'm too tired so I'm on my way to dreamland.....
Take care all, Sleep sweet and sweet dreams!
Jennifer
Max-Rom ~ Nice to see you here again! It's been almost a month!
You asked us to comment. I liked the unsuredness of your poem The Softest Glow (Is Sharp Tonight). It seems a little rough around the edges at the first reading, but each subsequent time is smoother. I love the line "the softest glow
is sharp tonight."
The line "...our fearful feet would tread..." reminds me of the line I wrote;
"And unsure wishes do flee on fearful feet." in Do Not Bend Me
Cool.
-Teej
Jennifer ~ (wierd since my name is Jennifer too - feel like I am commenting to myself)
thanks for the kudos on my latest.
Max-room: I liked your post, too.
Reality is a sword for those who know - nice
Just Some Girl -
Please have a very, most joyous, Birthday today. I can't wait to sip bubbly and gush with happiness over the Darling I adore. I hope your phone wasn't acting up all night! And, I hope all can soon be forgotten - I am sorry.
Fennifer
Kevin, Jon, TJ, Misti, and Brianna~wonderful poems! I liked them all. Great job all!
Max~I believe your block is gone. I loved it! Wonderful job.
Thank you Jennifer. Hearing that you liked a poem of mine brightened my day.
-Teej
Bubbly will be waiting! Thanks for the birthday wishes...red IS soooo my color!!!