Correction: tj holland wished he/she had written that poem. But B.K. you have inspired me nonetheless. The board was much more active three years ago. Jim
chris I love por vida
the best part-
"sleep never came easy for me
and it still doesn't
but like deep space
cradles the stars
what you give me is rest
more blessed than saints
who probably never even existed
in the first
place"
i love how you combine words and ideas like that. you make me jealous!
suffocating lux- welcome dig your first work here exchange., good stuff! i like the line you start off with "smiling always came easier than this."
star of david- you know i already love all your work, but i can feel the heartache/break reading this, and it made my own heart ache for you. Your Letters Break My Heart
girlonthewing - I was looking for a sign and your latest might have provided it. Thanks.
Jolee, what kind of a sign were you looking for?
thanks for the welcome people! :) chris por vida is fantastic - your second stanza is delicious, i especially love
'and then you die
to find out god's in aruba and won't
be back 'til next spring'
Congratulations, Sassy. The name Dylan holds a very special place in my heart (not because of Bob ;-).