hollywoodfox, about I Loved You Once, But Not Twice:
Hi Hollywoodfox,
WOW! Oh yea I can so relate to this!! Excellent submit. Thank you
unconditional, about Maybe If:
Hi Unconditional,
Love this line-->Maybe if I stopped thinking that, this realtionship could start. Great work! :)
Lovewhispers, about The Real Lies:
This reminds me of word play from a series of books called "Conversations With God"...and I LOVE it. Brilliant. And thanks for your thumbs up, I'm a fan of your stuff too!
Happy 4th Everyone!
So many excellent submissions I need to take a day off work to catch up with them all :) Thanks for being the peaceful haven of beautiful thoughts,,, so much talent here!!
Thanks Hollywoodfox!!
I havent read that but I WILL :) Thanks for your kind thoughts too. REALLY loved yours today! :)
Ali, about Paralyzed: This piece left me speechless. You have successfully put into words emotions that I’ve been wrestling with for months. You have a true gift of speaking directly form the heart.
hollywoodfox, about I Loved You Once, But Not Twice:
This is a powerful yet heartbreaking piece. I especially like the closing:
So, thank you for the time we've shared,
I'll now be on my way,
It's time to greet tomorrow, and
Blow a kiss to yesterday.
You’re a good friend to stand by someone you feel so close to, knowing that the relationship may never lead to its full potential. We all need a friend like you!
i'm just him, about Someday after all this :
Ouch! Your words convey both your pain and healing process. What a moving piece!
blakey~
Thank you so sweetly for you kind words; I am happy that you liked that poem. That is an amazing compliment, btw, saying that you could relate ot that piece--that means I've done my job right! *smile*
Again--thank you so very much. You have now made me smile, from ear to ear!