HaremGirl and Just L, thank you for the inspiring comments. they mean a lot to me :-)
musicalduck, about Let Me Go:
love.
musicalduck, about Truth:
always the case, isn't it? :-/
HaremGirl, about VIVISECTION:
i wonder when we'll ever be able to stop dissecting, inspecting, etc. we can't seem to help ourselves; almost as if we don't think we're worthy of something good and keep searching for the catch!
HaremGirl, about ONE LOOSE THREAD:
scary isn't it?
seck, about memorial day:
this hurts.
HaremGirl, about When You Reach the Summit:
good one.
B.K., about Love is Carrots and Beets:
super stuff :D
aparajita, about Waking Up:
ouch. ouch. ouch.
seck, about solitary:
hug.
love this piece.
AmandaB, about Men...:
spot on! applause!
B.K., about Syncopated Smooch Spit:
lovely! :D
musicalduck, about What did we have?:
good one.
Purvi a friend of someone who is "Poetically incorrect" :) , about Forgetfulness:
love this!
musicalduck, about Couch:
the last line is killing me.
Just L, about Sprinkles:
sweet.
Star of David, about Exorcism:
I carried around letters for fifteen years and finally had to let them go. It is a powerful medicine to let go.
bk
Thanks Harem Girl and Star of David for your comments. Both of you are doing some great writing...keep it up for June.
bk
thanks Star of David, hugs are always welcome.
HaremGirl, about VIVISECTION.
love this piece..