Gala's Summer Love Competition

Gala set up a little competition to poetically celebrate summer romance and the songs that celebrate. The rules were to create a poem that A. has the theme of Summer Love, B. Has at least FOUR titles of summer songs, or incorporates four whole lines from the various songs, and C. "Has COMPLETELY boss title". Also, once a song title or line was used it was offlimits. It didn't get the biggest turnout, but some of the results were quite good and interesting

I decline presiding as judge, since I had been a bit burnt out from selecting the Front Page Picks, so here are the ones that Gala thought best caught the flavors of the quick-disapearing season:

Gala's Top Pick

Waiting for a Cool Front
By Echolocation

Heard a song on the radio today:
"My love is warmer than the warmest sunshine..."
It made me laugh
Hell, that's the understatement of the year
When your eyes lock onto mine
You could fry an egg on my skin
Just one look, that's all it took
Heat rising without and within
Could it be the devil in me
Or is this the way love's supposed to be?
Can't even cool off at night
Dreams of your touch scorching my flesh
Summer days, driftin' away, but
Oh, those summer nights...



First Runner Up

Ninety-Three
By Tanqueray Cowboy

93 Days
That's all you've got
Just 93
Hot days
Brown-Eyed Girl Days
Makin' Love Behind the Stadium days
You've got 93
Cruel, Cruel Summer days
93
Endless Summer days
tequila
and sunrise days
93
God!
Ain't good to be young days
To find Your Ice Cream Man
You've got
93 days
93 hot days
93 long hot
Boys of Summer days
One More Time to Kill the Pain days
That's all you've got, Mary Jane
They'll be gone
soon enough
In the amber haze
of the 93 Days

School's Out
and it's time
time to play
for 93
Hot, hot days



Second Runner Up

And Then Suddenly, Last Summer
By scqueen

Your eyes were crystal clear,
you loved to hold my hand,
I wrote to you that year,
love letters in the sand...

You said,
"Will I see you in September?"
I said,
"Yeah, when the summer's through",
And then I remembered,

Hell, no!

I'M A HONKY TONK WOMAN!!

And you still said,
"Where did our love go"?



Other Entries

A Siren's Song
By wistful

Passionate promises
Under the boardwalk
Sing to me of
Endless love.

A siren’s song
Recalling past pleasures
Grown ever stronger
In memory’s keeping.

The melody
Haunts my revery
And livens my sadness
If only for a moment’s
Relived joy.

Let the memory live again . . .



My Summer Breeze
By ~Harem~

You were everything to me.
You were my summer breeze, my winter sun,
my springtime soul, my autumn touch of gold.
morning's mist, daylight's kiss,
nights of bliss, all untold

We shared our love thru summer's laughter
You never said you wouldn't make me cry,
but summer love will keep us warm long after
Our autumn goodbye.

All summer long, we sang a song -
and strolled on golden sand
swimming in love and happy tears
walking hand in hand

And now we part with saddened heart
making wishes upon stars above.
I give you this, the last rose of summer,
A token of my unyielding love

~



Hot Town "Summer In The City"
By B.K.

“Crying” again over my “Dream Lover”
my face “A Whiter Shade of Pale”
till I got a message that said
“Build Me Up Buttercup”
and signed “Don’t Worry Baby,”
everything will work out. I know
we were “Born To Be Wild” love
that “Our Day Will Come”
When we’ll have everything
We’ll take that, “Magic Carpet Ride”
That “Stairway to Heaven” but
Till then “I Go to Pieces” every
Time my baby passes by. Seems
More like “The End of the World”
When you said goodbye so I pray
To the “Spirit in the Sky” that you’re
One “Fortunate Son”
“Wouldn’t it be Nice” but
“Since I Don’t Have You”
“The Worst That Could Happen”
In the “California Sun” is that you
Would just “Laugh Laugh” and
“Be My Baby” anyway. So “Don’t
Let the Sun Catch You Crying”
Cause actually “I’m Into Something
Good” “Up On the Roof” Just
Meet Me “Under the Boardwalk”
Where we’ll meet “Peggy Sue” “Venus”
And “Johnny Angel” and be sure to say
“Hello Mary Lou”
“It’s Kind of A Drag” but “Loui Loui”
I gotta go now!
But as usual I’m sending “All My Lovin”
To you.  “Candy Kisses”

Your BK

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