SmilingKat; Thank you for your comment on 'Passion Play.'
ElluZion; Thanks for sharing 'The Other Condition.' It makes sense to me as well.
Gala: 'More Time To Think Less Time To Dream,' Your work just gets better every day. Wonderful poem!
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ey this is DREAMER the guy thats been writing few peoma bout love and stuff...well i jus wanted to let u poeple kno im only thirteen and i wouldnt mind getting to kno some other peots out there............it'll be nice to find some one witht the same point of veiw life .............so i guess i talked to one of you laters or somethign
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Dreamer; If you are only 13 then you are doing very well with your poetry, 'For The Dream' is in song form. Keep writing for us please.
bk
delilah~ thank you for your comment about Reasonable Cause. It means alot to me when someone takes the time to share what they think about what I write. I am guilty of not doing that as much as I should. I just feel the time slip away READING everything here, and before I know it, it's time to get back to the jail for another 12 hour shift! Anyway, Rigg's has always written things that strike a chord in me, and so I bumped his Life Imitates Art poem. He's great! And I think your work is too! Particularily, haze, which whispers of ancient things to me!
TJ Holland
To Distant Moon ~ Who said their are no Cats out there ??
Sorry - just could not resist.... had to bump you....
and bump and bump.... *giggle...
To B.K. ~ ANYTIME... *Smile / and by the way.... I have not taken the time until now to tell you that I always read your stuff.... You are an excellent writer.... and always give such supportive comments ... And you are sharp as a hat pin, too..
To Smiling Kat ~
Thank you so much for your comment... *Sigh...
~Harem~
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To B.K. ~
"We're Not Worthy".... You really have a way to make a person stop and think.... GREAT...
To Tanqueray Cowboy ~
"Love at First Sight" and "Excuse Me"
OUCH ! ! ! (My special word for things that I really like)
and more OUCH ! ! ! .... I loved them both.... I really don't know what to say, except that you are very creative and brilliantly - brilliant.... MORE, MORE, MORE... Please.. You have a way with words... OUCH...
To AKASH ~
"Never Ending Dream" - I really liked this one.... I was there watching you pick up the stone, I could feel its cool wetness, dripping from the stream that it came from.... I could see the engraved name... and see the look in your eyes as you peered upon it, the look upon your face ..... I could feel your feelings.....
BRAVO ! ! !
~Harem~
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To Tanqueray Cowboy ~
Forgot to tell you.... Ouch is like (hurts so good)...
*blush...
Anyways...
About your writing.... The part about cup size and looks..,
I agree with you totally... It's the same way for me, and probably lots of people... It's not in the looks - nor in the size / but the eyes.... the soul, the aura, the karma, or whatever you call it... An ethereal feeling or force that radiates invisibly when you communicate.... and even when you don't.... just looking into each others eyes silently.... smelling their skin....
touching.... it's just a feeling that can never be described..... EVER... and can sometimes even be felt through their writing.... since writing is generated from the heart - the soul - the inner passions -
~Harem~
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Ali~ your work one of those perfect nights was calm and perfect. One of those nights that people dream of. And you expressed it so finely. (Is 'finely' a word? LOL!)I mean it in the way talcum is fine. Smooth, silky. That's how I felt when I read it.
TJ
Harem ~
Thanks so much for the kind words (he blushes and bows deeply.)
I'm enjoying the Cat Series... very reminiscent of your risque alter ego. Bravo.
B.K. ~
Thanks for the bump... ;->
Harem ~
Thanks so much for the kind words (he blushes and bows deeply.)
I'm enjoying the Cat Series... very reminiscent of your risque alter ego. Bravo.
B.K. ~
Thanks for the bump... ;->
Doggonit! Sorry about the double post... not quite sure how that happened. -tc
To 'me aka niki' ~
"One of those perfect nights" - happens to be one of those perfect poems.... You painted a wonderfully romantic scene with your words ! ! ! ... I even got pleasure from it... *blush ... well I did ! ! I felt like I was there.... and your description of the entire event was GREAT... Thanks for sharing... ~Harem~
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