Violet,
Thanks for the compliment. Glad you liked.
I'm asking for comments regarding my latest submission...."Returning Ill fitting things"
I've been in a major slump lately and that was the first piece to come out of my brain in a while so I'd like some advice on it...ok its time for class...
Thanks everyone.
Thanks Jennifer! Your little compliment shocked me into a big smile 'cos I'm new to the whole internet world and have never really experienced the beauty of feedback before...I think I'm here to stay now!
Sushlove~You're very welcome. I'm not new to the internet but I am new to this site. I've only been here for about a week and I have fell in love with this place! I have such a passion for poetry. I don't find that I'm all that great at writing it myself, however I can tell that you have a gift for it. I hope you continue to add your poems here, I'd love to read more.
Beyond Different~I really enjoyed your poem! It was different, but very good. At first I wasn't sure where you were going with it, but as I reached the end I had to go back and read it all over.....I liked it that much!
B.K. I love that you are submitting some old things...I missed them a long time ago and its so much fun to read and compare to newer subs...you have me reading my older works now.
Distant Moon- Just wanted you to know I read your new sub (I always do) and "Hopeful" is me- your faithful cousin Megs.
Dylan- I LOVED "I Spring Loved You" Gosh...fantastic.
Truelies- Joesph You Said Love...I know that feeling currently. Its just so good to read something that makes you go...yes...that is exactly IT. Thanks.
For now that is all...I am nursing my sick man back to health. Hopefully I will build good karma and deflect the illness!!!
Love Megs
Oh and Violet...
Thanks for noticing/commenting on my last few works. The great ex purge is upon me ;) Then I can write all sorts of love poems again.
LOTS of love...Megs
BK:
Admittedly, I'm pretty slow on this one, but I really like: She Runs To You. It uses voice and a perspective that I'm not used to hearing, an certainly not used to writing. Putting it in the third person, and having it told was great. I almost felt that, like this, I was more involved in the poem. Admittedly, I would prefer that HE runs to me... but I was enchanted nonetheless. :)
Sil~
I love Dear Trevor, !!!
Megs~
Chris still reads old Boards sometimes and I cringe. Good to see ya back.
dev0n:
Just read your cover poem: deeper, perhaps.
Wow. That was great.
Rhet,
Could you show me an example? Are you talking msg board posts or new submissions? I haven't really noticed any aberrant anonymous things in either...I have noticed one or two link screwups that I should probably try to debug sometime when I'm not so busy lookin' for work... (36 days to go 'til I'm on 4 weeks of severance...)
Kirk,
Not trying to be critical, I was just wondering how it could happen.
For example:
March 6th: the entry with ??? (it just says by . ) - has no name attached to it and the author even addressed the group by letting them know that he/she was anonymous.
I was under the impression that your entry (message board or poetic) would not be complete without a name and password.
Jen
Hopeful - Thank you for understanding... It's good to know I'm not simply screwed up when it comes to relationships!
Truelies-
I absolutely cringe at the introduction of the "l" word. It feels like the kiss o'death. What a sad cynical view at 21 eh? Oh well...I DO keep trying :) What this means is...we are all screwed up in our own perfect ways.
Misti-
Hey lady. I was wondering when I'd see your name. I am keeping a low profile here...especially since I only cruise by every three days or so. But I would adore an email fro \m YOU (Megs1225@hotmail.com) Hope to hear many good things.
Love Megs