whisper ~ someday ~ I think you touched on a few chords with me. Pretty sure I've been there before. I thought it was brilliant and so well written.
Ange
Hey Jon - I liked customer service. It made me smile, right at the end... I can actually imagine a friend of mine, who works in customer service, being that way. Actually... I've seen her do it!
whisper - someday...
soulwolf - I just went thru and read about half your stuff. Just one word. Wow. And as for memories! ... LOL!
lynx... Re:Brutal Honesty
love... I, um... well... geez. *blush*
God bless all, have a great day,
(the greatly flustered) H
Ange,
You take, but you never give WOW!...been there before! Sometime, we should talk and compare some stories...I have read all your submissions and can relate!
CryingShame
Rennie - Frayed Knots is... incredible.
Galadrial - Venus left me speechless.
H
Me too, Hcat...me too.
:o( Galadrial, you ok?
Thank you Hcat...but that is a complex question with several possibke answers...
I will live.
CryingShame
Thanks for your comments, is nice to know someone else gets where I'm coming from! Havent bought BDJ soundtrack yet, but its definately on the list! Have been reading through your stuff too...meeting of minds! Perhaps we should set up an 'angry' harem :) hee hee. Keep writing, I'm loving your stuff
Take care, Ange x
Zero Love ~ how does it feel? ~ so great. Know exactly how that one feels (right now actually!)
Echolocation ~ Literary Ladies ~ ahhh, you see, I think this was where I was trying to go with 'being Bridget Jones'! didnt quite pull it off, but you did! Iloved it! I'm sure most of us girls feel like that at sometime (or most of the time?!)
Splatipus ~ thanks you! tis nice to be back! I think it may be handbags at dawn again, though have a feeling we now have more competition (i.e. Echolocation & CryingShame!) i think we have a MR Darcy fan club going on!
x
Just Some Girl and Galdrial:
I liked your poems Girl on Topand the third tit of venus. They somehow sparked my new post. Neither of them are really evident in my actual wording - but the sentiments are.
Funny how reading something from another can pull out the thoughts you have inside. I know it happend all the time - but I have never had such an immediate thought!
Lydia
OK Ladies (and any so inclined men)
Hands up who loves Mr Darcy!!!!!!!!!!
(I even fancied him years ago when I first read the book at school, before Colin Firth came on the scene, you could just tell he was raunchy. Shame about the way those breeches give blokes a slightly lobsided 'camel toe' effect though isnt it!)
Lydia - 'Drifter' - loved the way you wrote it, could really feel it
Kim - Could really identify with '???'
Galadial - 'the Third tit of venus' is excellent, not surprised you get tired!
Soulwolf - 'memories' made me laugh! Can I ask what Mt. Dew is?
Loving everybodies submissions! Wish I could comment on them all!
splatipus-- Mt. dew is one of my two favorite sodas. I wrote Memories, because I realized a few days ago that my two favorite sodas has specific childhood memories. it was kinda cool!!
Oh Lydia ~ drifter Bravo!
Hi Lydia...yes, I can see where you were coming from...
And Crying? I learned almost a year ago that you can't hate yourself for being wrong---not if someone went a damned long way to convince you that they were something they weren't...
Splat---Lydia---thank you. Sometimes the ink we use is just a little heart blood, one line at a time...
Kirk- I just wanted to let you know that I am very happy I stumbled upon your board. I like the set up, it is easy to navigate. I love the way people share comments and feedback, I like your survey questions, and most important of all, your board seems to attract an almost ludicrous amount of talented writers!! Thank you for this board. Now if I could only find a board like this for other kinds of poetry, any suggestions?
B.K.- Ode to Black and Decker, that was a fun one to read. Recently I have discovered that shoveling shingles off roofs, and hammering anything (really hard), is also a good way to get anger out. Here I was thinking men liked odd things and odd jobs, for no apparent reason, when really they know just what fun it is!
spaded