This is the first time I've written poetry to be enjoyed (hopefully) by others. I appreciate the kind words and look forward to using any helpful suggestions or criticisms. Unfortunately, grammar and punctuation went out the window for me a loooong
time ago . lol
quixote
P.S. I've read some really great stuff so far. I enjoyed
Jane Rain's "unnoteworthy occurance" and chris' "tonight i said", and I really appreciate Misti's honest emotions.
Look forward to more.
quixote
Thanks, Tanq.
Yes, you are a poet with a solid body of kick ass work. That's the truth. I'm listening to my favorite Bob Dylan songs these days. The last line of "You're a Big Girl Now" especially hits close to home. Ouch is right.
I've been in love more than a few times but I don't remember ever aching this deeply for a man, wanting this desperately to make things right. I'm trying to get the therapy I've needed for years, finally, and at the same time I am trying to make a long-distance relationship work. I feel like I'm in rehab. No parties, just work. The hardest work of my life. Out of all of that poetry is bound to happen.
JD~
I just read everything you've submitted. wOw. You have a strong, beautiful, unique voice. I can't wait to read more of your writing. You are awesome. Your spirit really shines through.
quixote~
thank you. I'll always have my honesty.
...lately I keep thinking of that Bette Davis line in "Now, Voyager"..."Let's not ask for the moon. We have the stars."
Bette Davis as Charlotte Vale:
"Oh Jerry, don't let's ask for the moon. We have the stars."
((sigh))
Hey Love Dog; This one is fantastic, may we have more please Almost Forgotten
bk
Love Dog,
Almost Forgotten:
What B.K. said!