From: Ali
Date: 22 August 2005

Savannah~

Holy hell girl, Just We is hot! Fantastic piece. Excellent ending too! :)

Love and gathered grace, Ali

From: Star of David
Date: 22 August 2005

Savannah Haze
I have loved Autumn Leaves from the first time I read it and I've never had enough of reading it. I know it by heart; it's one of my all time favourites. You needn't thank me for compimenting such a beautiful piece; I thank you for writing it. It's a poem that is always at the back of my mind.
Star of David.

From: Star of David
Date: 22 August 2005

Distant moon Two Years and
JD Confession
Lucky you!

Jon
waiting
“that twisted feeling,
I've come to know.”
Very touching and sad. Hope you’re ok...

redplasticroses
Aftertaste
“Wondering what is real
What will last
Small parts of you
And small parts of me
Pulled from the dark, sacred space
Deep inside our souls”

“Are we building a monument
To be cherished and worshiped
Or a sandcastle on the beach at low tide
That will be gone without a trace”

Beautiful piece.

From: sassy
Date: 22 August 2005

Ali: I wanted to stand up and cheer after I read When I Could Imagine this one is amazing. Perfect flow, perfect images, just stunning.

Cryingshame58 I really like Constant Drama I have had the same thoughts a time or two myself.

i’m just him till angels come made me smile

jon; waiting is perfect

From: sassy
Date: 22 August 2005

Ali: I wanted to stand up and cheer after I read When I Could Imagine this one is amazing. Perfect flow, perfect images, just stunning.

Cryingshame58 I really like Constant Drama I have had the same thoughts a time or two myself.

i’m just him till angels come made me smile

jon; waiting is perfect

From: ~Harem~
Date: 22 August 2005

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Thanks Savannah Haze

Is there really a haze over savannah ?



~Harem~


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From: Savannah Haze
Date: 22 August 2005

Sometimes there is. ;)

It's just a pen name, unfortunately.

From: i'm just him
Date: 22 August 2005

Savannah Haze~~ "just we" WOW i'm thinking your best piece ever but thats just me talking.


sassy~~ thank you, i miss your work even if its been just a week or two i need it atleast every other day. Your words would be my coffee in the morning if i drunk it.


jon~~ "waiting" nice, how you still make good poetry after all this time is amazing, you take poetry and run with it your feet have to be hurting by now

~i'm just him~
tru story

From: Ali
Date: 22 August 2005

sassy~

I'm so glad that you enjoyed this piece so much; it was written late at night, and posted shortly after. :) Thanks for the compliment!!

Love and dreaming grace, Ali