aparajita,,,,,, Awwwwwww thank you so much for you kind words. I love this board alot and it holds deep meaning for me. Yours are always a delight and hold so much depth when I read them also. Work has kept me away for a while and I am hoping I can get back to catch up on all the beautiful talent here. Thank you again!!
lovewhispers, about The Path to Alone:
wow, this really hits home...great writing...made me sit back and think..and see the similarities in my life...especially the last verse
"As I watch through the window,,,his apparent despair
His life is now over,,,, wishing someone were there.
What could it had been,,, taking another path instead?
Turns off the PC,,,walks alone to his bed.
Another day has past, another day is gone,,,
Nothings much changed,,,he's still all alone."
maybe its time for me to re-evaluate..ty for the eye opener whispers
lonesome_day01 Thank you very much for your kind words and appreciation of some pretty lonely thoughts. I love this person dearly and it hurts so much to watch his life go own without him,,, on a lighter note your " Wants and Needs (by Bob) 2006 Sep 16" >> specifically>>
"It would be nice to
come home to a kiss
a nice warm hug
and a whisper in my ear
just letting me know
how much you care."
Moves me and warms me, can feel myself in that moment,,, and loving it! Thank you for your fabulous entries here, very heartfelt and reflective for me as well.
Sarah143, about Making Love:
Sarah,,,, all I can say is " mmmmmmm!!!" when I read the passion in this statement "Touch me until I am no longer there" HOT!! you go girl this is a great entry!! thanks
aparajita, about time heals in it's own way, in time:
ohhhhhhh,, the sadness I felt when I read these words aparajita,,, makes me want to cry feeling the letting go being experienced in your thoughts.
"the colors of my memories are fading" "now resides vague dim shadows of you",,,,,, big sigh!! love your work! :)
Ali, about Implausible:
Nice work Ali ! Once particular part hit me, I have been here before and totally related to not wanting to know what my heart would could shouldnt perhaps ,,, be capable of>>
"Don't ask me to forgive you--
I don't want to know
if, indeed, I can. "
I agreee,,,,,,Somethings, are better not knowing
To ALL the front pagers,,,, this is an embarrassingly late entry ( I do apologize for not being around to catch up until now).... but CONGRATS to all of you!! Some things are better late than never as they say,,,, especially when its appreciation of great works of art! wtg!!
lonesome_day01, about belong:
"where does love go
why doesn't it stay
when push comes to shove
and i'm falling
deeply in love
something always
goes wrong
out comes
another sad song
when all i want
is to belong"
Maybe you have been looking for love in all the wrong places? When love is right, for me at least, I feel it throughout my entire body, and when I am with that person again, its the same or even more intense than the last time,,,,Be careful what you ask for as they say (smiling) love may just find you when you least expect it!! Great work please keep sharing!!
Thanks lovewhisphers, Hot and sensual is exactly what I was trying to capture, making love is best when you just let go and let it over take you. Ive also been reading your works and think that they are over come with emotion, which is exactly the way they should be. Every thing you write has a little piece of you in it somewhere. Thanks so much sweetie xoxo Sarah...
lovewhispers~
Thank you so very much! I am very glad that you liked. It is a comfort to know that I am not the only one who has felt something like that. Thank you for the comment!! :-)
willtobe1, about Naked Truth, revisited:Your line below hit home with me...
"But somewhere in my naked pain
There must have been a pretty Truth"
i've shown that naked pain to someone unworthy and not sure if i'll ever reveal it again...you have a real simple way to explain the complexity of relationships...
CS%*
lovewhispers: you are welcome and thanks back at ya.
ijh: you have so been missed. please hang around more often.
blessed23: hey marsh!! where are you??????
rens: you ok? we do need to plan us a blender family reunion... i am sooo serious about this! looks like i may be traveling more with my main m-f job. don't yet know if i'll get TN in my territory. if i do, guess where i'll try to find first??? (somewhere you and bk can meet me!!)
bk: how's your mom??? and, dear friend, how are you?
abby: are you moved and settled in yet? would dearly love to do that housewarming party for ya. treat you to some southern hospitality. i get dibs on cooking for the party (or at least most of it). we sure miss you too around here.
hey lady... where are you??? need your words of wit around here soon.
wolfscreamer: my love... where are you?
jack: did you find another rock?
jim: were you being impersonated a while back or was it really you???
willtobe1, about Naked Truth, revisited: loved the word play.
unselfloveability? wow.
"And how can I wear my love when you loved not what I wore?"
"If I must love either me or you
I’ll neither ever have
And that will never do"
awesome. how true when we offer all we have and it remains still yet not enough. hard to imagine giving ever again what is not there.