no white flag, about missing you:
This is truly from the heart.When I read this a second time as Sarah earlier commented like her I felt a physical ache inside,I think many of us hang on in there with phone calls and occasional meetings in the hope it will all come right again but when its gone its gone,it went for a reason and that reason is always going to be there.Sometimes I feel its not quite right to say something is superb when commenting on a piece that was written when the writer was feeling down rather than written for enjoyment, so I,ll just say this had better be a front page pic(Jon)
Sarah143, about Rage:
wow Sarah...said with your emotions...said very well...visceral...my heart goes out to you
thank you so very much aparajita for your comment
this truely is a give and take forum,,
i take inspiration and so much more,,
a tear,, a smile,, something good too wonder over
.i can feel joy,,and sometimes, so much pain
so,, wolfscreamer,, ty too,,,,,,,,
when i read your comments,,a tear,,
I dont feel so all alone.
rennielorca, about HOWL O' WEAN:
Rens you made me HOWL this morning with this one. ha I love it.
bk
rennielorca, about HOWL O' WEAN:
yes,,barefoot and cloakless.
now,,all you need is a vibrating broom.
well done
rennielorca, about HOWL O' WEAN:
This is totally lovely!! Great post. And thanks for the compliment, btw!
BK~
Thanks for the kind words, my dear. I am glad that you enjoyed.
nowhiteflag~
Vibrating broom!! Hahaha. That was classic. And, yeah, my mind sooo went straight to the gutter, with that. hehehe
j. knipp, about From "Tonight I can Write":
this is such a favorite work that I have the entire piece in my blender account. Thanks for digging out the heart of this work and posting it today.
b.k., no white flag, Ali~thanks for the comments :-). Was too tired to think, but this one was too much fun not to play with and post. Thanks for the challenge, b.k.! ...... Rennie
RennieLorca, about Untitled:
j.knipp~there are a number of translations of this, but Merwin's is my favorite ...... Rennie
Aparajita: Hope all is great with you! Miss you! All is well in Atlanta. ATL Dating: Same wackos: new accents! Loved your new poem!
Rens: Loving your new stuff too! Hope all is well!