Ali, about sometimes, I think of you: Wow. this is fantastic. "As if proximity
was the cause of all ills,
and the spark of all joys.
Because distance isn't really distance
until the stars have died," this in particular, made my skin jump. it has a wonderful, fluid flow. i'm a little upset i missed this until now.
oh and congrats to all the other front pagers!
B.K., about Mowing Grass at Sunset: this is wonderful. the opening line is perfect. oh, but what does the "ohm" in the fifth line mean/supposed to be? lovely work my friend, lovely work.
distant moon, about Mer de l'amour: mmmmhhhhh. i enjoyed this. the last few lines are wonderful imagery.
Briana Kassia, about the third law of something:
Wow. This is fantastic. How you used space in positioning the words is used well. the words are quite poignant. This is one of my favourites i've read on here in a while. well done chap.
B.K. baha, I actually didn't notice it right away, i was a bit confused at first, but then it clicked. oh, and thankyou.
Ali - Thankyou. coming from someone who writes as well as you do, that's quite a compliment. thanks.
thanks for the compliments, Blessed. :) It was sposed to be atMosphere but by the time I saw it to edit, Kirk had already Picked it. Kirk, pretty pwease, can we spell that word right? lol
Marsh; Thanks for the inspiration. We do what are called "bumps" around here. Someone will write something that reminds us of something similar.
Ohm is a chant that just rumbles from your gut..ha
bk