B.K., about Tattooed :
Nice, and funny.
Edmundo D, about Short Ode to Apollo:
I know nothing seems to be,
but what I feel is all of me
Nice lines well spoken;
Edmundo D, Welcome to the blender of love. We are a diverse group of all ages that enjoy poetry and prose. Hope you will write more for us.
Oh yes thanks for your comment on Tattooed...none of it's true haaa. I don't have any tattoos and I barely drink. It was a wild lark written.
bk
beginagain, about Since You've Been Gone: this is a nice piece, i've been going back looking at people's old work and i like the detail and the loneliness in these words, beautiful
~i'm just him~
writings of her
maxwell, about pretty wings: i love this song as well, its so maxwell
~i'm just him~
writings of her
~Harem~, about "Kiss" A Frog - or KISS A PRINCE ?: WOW, this is like nothing i've ever read before. a fairytale in reverse, i love it.
"Kiss a frog to make a prince
And so the story goes
you might get warts upon your lips
but then one never knows."
~i'm just him~
writings of her
CryingShame58, about We Got It:
Nice. It's bad when you have it all, and yet there's always something in the way... :-) Can totally relate.
Edmundo D, about Short Ode to Apollo:
"I know nothing seems to be,
but what I feel is all of me."
I love this line! It brings the whole poem full circle :-) Nice job!
B.K., about Tattooed :
HAHAHA! Awesome :-)