Camelia Lissenhold, about Havana Rewind: As my Capt often said, "I loved Cuba" ... I've been the piano player and the audience. Brings back many memories. Enjoyed.
Kirk, thank you for the front page pick. Sorry to be so long in thanking you for the comment :). Life is still too much of a roller coaster with health and family.
I've come to read many times this month, but quickly get yanked offline by calls. But there are calls that I cherish, and I am grateful to you, b.k., for your unwaivering friendship in checking on me.
Vishal, glad to see you commenting once again. Harem, your poems are ones I have recently found myself wanting to bump. Same with jack's. b.k., I never get tired of your works, new or old. Welcome, new blenderites. I'll try to do more commenting later since I have been reading the submissions ...... Rennie
Hi Kirk,
Thanks for the Front page pick.
You made me giggle and smile.
You brought out the "Little Girl"
in me...... Thanks
~Harem~
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Jane Doe, about Buses and Trains:
"Chocolates and Cigarettes"
You make it sound "Addictive"
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Star of David, about Hello October:
Very Clever and precise.
A Dark Meeting with Autumn.
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Jasmine, about What Could Have Been:
Just remember that our memory of the
past is often better than it really
was - Focus on the Future instead,
it may outshine "what could have been".
Great Piece. Wonderful Writing.
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Jasmine, about [["What Could Have Been":2009.10.23.00.14.10207]
irish-eyes77; Nice to see you here at blender, "Welcome," old or new we are always happy to see new names. Nice work.
Rens; I just had att in this morning. They gave me a new box and now I can harness those gerbils. Funny they said if I lived a little closer to the grocery store the gerbils would run twice as fast. Gotta feed those critters I guess. haa
bk
~Harem~, about An "Addiction" Called LOVE:
Oh! Com'on!
Love IS pain!
FEELINGS are pain!
Your poem is b-sh!!
Answer - if you dare...
directly to FalconRia!!"
Hey Falcon Ria,
Thanks for commenting on my work.
Everyone is entitled to their own
opinion. Our perceptions may be
the same sometimes and different
at other times. That's real.
Even our perception changes over time.
I enjoy writing as a spinoff from
other people's works. We call it
bumping here. I do it all the time.
We kinda inspire each other that way.
*wink
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Thanks to b.k. and Rennie for the comments on Havana Rewind. Rennie, I would love to hear more about your experience there.
One of the great things about being new on here is getting to go back and read everyone's older postings, in addition to the new. I am enjoying.
Camelia Lissenhold, about Without You:
I've read all your work so far and
find it to be very captivating.
That's the word "captivating".
At First I could not think of the
word to describe your writing.
You are an awesome writer and I am
enjoying your works "immensely".
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thanks Harem