Me aka Niki- I love the end of my revenge, I know how you feel have been in a very similar situation. I really wanted to get him back but I couldn't bring myself to stoop that low.
~Sati~
Elaina~ Eh, I'm doing alright...sort of...how 'bout you? You holding up okay?
Love and light, Ali
max-caress and pretzels, *smiles!*
niki- i loved yer revenge...
hey everyone, i would love to comment on eveything, but i only had time to read a few for the night, but ill have time later i hope, and ill catch up. but i love everything ive read so far. keep it up!
*<with marshmellows>*
Ali~ I'm sorry you are not fantastic. Well, I'll just say stupid boy hasn't gotten any smarter.
xoxo
elaina
Flash~ I would made me cry, and it was just so beautiful and true. I really can relate, yet relate to the person you wrote that for. If you don't mind my asking when was this love and how long before you realized that you could love back...if you ever did.
xoxo
elaina
Wistful ~ wow! Such emotion comes through on "Betrayed"! I liked it very much! And then I went to look at your other works and saw "Waiting Game"...was that about the same person? If so, were you able to see the 'betrayal' coming, knowing what you knew while you played the waiting game? Or has hindsight reared it's head here? wow. I'm sorry you're hurting, but the poem that came out of it was powerful.
-Teej
To Wistful ~ "BETRAYED" - was GREAT !!! It amazed me, how I felt a rhyme that wasn't there ..... Or was it ??? It matters not, but the genius of the writing made me feel a soothing flow of words - with a message resounding clear as a bell.... Thank you so much !!!
~Harem~
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Max-Rom:
Well, there's
http://loveblender.com/blimage/lebanner4.gif
Or you can use the frontpage's moving blender, or the small little blender that's at the bottom of like the comments page.
http://www.angelfire.com/art/jahpoetryonline/links.html...
that's a pretty...overwhelming kinda page...
Untamed Bird ~ I LOVED 'Watermelon Dancers' :-)
Hmm. After I installed the User system here, I noticed a bit of a decrease in the number of posts to the board; seems like it was temporary,judging by the last week or so here on the board.
Thx 2 Sati and Hot chocolate for your nice comments!:))
Hey Blenderites!!
I need some advice: I have so many snippets and short poems that I wish could make them a complete work. Maybe I am trying to hard. Or maybe, I just need to do something special to "jumpstart" my thoughts. Whatever it is, I need some advice nonetheless. So, if you have a suggestion to bring out the feelings in myself, please respond to this post.
Your Partner in Poetry,
Max-Rom ;)
Kirk; I think you just forgot to twirl your finger around and say, "Talk amongst yourselves." HA! I think it just took getting used to the new thing a ma jig thats all.
Harem; Thanks, I think I was just in a Stephen King mood when I wrote 'Love Avenged' Ha Maybe too much water on the brain who knows. I was mad when I wrote 'Make Me,' but I just can't stay mad at him, it's useless,(sigh)
SCQueen; Thank you so much. 'Watermelon Dancers,' was just writing something quick to amuse someone I love very much as I was running out the door. Funny how that works.