Hey SC....
She'll self destruct...fine work girl...too long a time no see! I like the converational verse...you made it work!
Gala
Gala; Wow, you don't know how much it means to get a compliment from you. Thanks so much. Tango One and Two, were just incredible pieces of work.
Wind; All of your poems were just lovely, I loved each one of them. Beautiful work.
greyskies; Your work lately has been awesome as well. Always look forward to reading what you write.
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Echolocation ~ just cut and paste the link code into your message. That will make the title of the work appear in your message. Voila!!
-Teej
Ohhhhhhhhh!!!!!! Weird!!!
Here's that post again (hoping it's RIGHT this time!).......
Echolocation ~ just cut and paste the link code into your message. That will make the title of the work appear in your message. Voila!!
-Teej
Apparently, using two sets of brackets in a message makes the words within those brackets appear next to the date....strange!! Echo, I'm sure you get the idea?!
Anywayyyyyyyyyy.....who here thinks that Don't Strain is too long and confusing??
(Sure, I'm stepping out on the porch with my hands up so you can blow me away)
-Teej
Sister Gala; Incredible! 'Tango,' One and Two. You trying to burn down the house?
Wind; Lover Moon, Beloved Sea was amazing as are the other two. But the moon is my mystical favorite.
Tanqueray; Write it any way you want it, we'll read it!
Terry; 'Moonsoon in the Desert,' Whew, get me a fan. Your writing is always a treat.
Greyskies; Sigh I was lovely. Loved that one. Always love your writing.
bk
Testing...
2001.07.19.01.50.2215
two syllables
(Hee hee, now that I know how to stick names in here I'm indulging myself by putting in a LOT of them...)
Gala - Tango One and Tango Two are great - and what a perfect title! (Ever since I saw "True Lies" I thought the tango was about the sexiest dance there is. YOu can keep your Dirty Dancing and your Lambada, baby, give me a tango every time!)
Kevin - knife is another one that packs a lot of punch into a few lines. It's almost like a companion piece to Tanq's Requiem
Isabella - You asked for some feedback on Forgotten, so for what it's worth here's my $.02. The first part is good, the way the writer keeps insisting they've forgotten even though obviously they're all tangled up in remembering (we all know THAT feeling). I also like the progression in the first 4 stanzas (lump in throat -> tears in eyes -> tears on face -> recovering). It might have been stronger if it had ended there, a nice circle; the remaining stanzas don't have the same "feel" and almost seem like they're a separate piece.
Madison~
Two Syllables: rich, painterly, deeply evocative and very moving.
Gala~
From Tangos to Waltzes -- MY god woman, what a range! Tell Kirk that pastoral is GOOD... after all, I don't know how many more Tangos we could take without some rest. ;->
-tc
Thank you, Tanqueray Cowboy.
Tanq,
You are a flatterer, and a shameless flirt.
Never change.
Gala
Madi...
Oh Girl...you nailed it. You nailed it right on. If Goodbye is not the most horrible word in the language...so how's you, wench?
Gala
Hey Echo....
Thanks...getting my sea legs back...glad you liked...hunting your stuff now!
Gala
wind-- Who is my love? is beautiful. You seem like a real gentleman. If you really are, then you should have no trouble finding your love! Keep writing. I'd like to read more of your work!!
Hi and evening, Gala! vEry good to (see) you. Everything is [the following is an understatement of mammoth proportions, oh! such biting wit] 'good' on this side of the screen, and on yours? I'll have to email & give you the details.
Madi