Galadrial's Shy Time (Dee's Challenge) Was Excellent !!
Made me think about, how true every word was.. It's kinda crazy, how you know, almost immediately, in the first few glances into someone's eyes !
CollegeChica's Come True, Fairy Tale! I liked this one.
It reminds one, of the fact that a new fairytale is always waiting around the corner after every lost dream.
Twinkle's taking me away an enjoyable read.
I liked this part :
"you make me forget myself in your peaceful eyes
they cut away my fears"
BlueSky to YourClouds's My Wish For You
I liked this part :
"Because I love
you more than you'll ever
understand...beyond romance..."
And I also enjoyed your - Tears Run Dry
This was my favorite part :
"I live a little more careful, look when I leap.
Keep my thoughts clear and only dream when I sleep."
B.K.'s My Eagle Love and Me MAGNIFICENT !!!
Randy1's Widows to The Soul
I liked this : "when you look into my eyes,
all you will see... is you." Sounds like your eyes are mirrors rather than windows !! *wink
DuDoll - on Where Did It Go relax - I think it happens to all writers.
Stephen's Pulse on the Lips Nice ! I can smell it.
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Hey gang...
I'm guessing you some of you might have gotten
the message with your password in it, saying a
request was made. Someone fwd'd me a message
they got, and it was the same IP address as the
one I received, spider.cwie.net.
A "spider" is a typical name for a "webcrawler",
an autmated bot that follows all the links it can
find, the type of things search engines use to
record the web. So it's probably just following
the link and triggering the requests. There
is a standard way of telling well-behaved 'bots to
ignore certain parts of the site (a "robots.txt"
file) but of course a badly behaved bot will go
wherever the hell it finds. I should look into
getting that setup.
I'm glad that things have settled down into a
groove here on the board the last week or so.
Kevin: any reason you skipped the dinner party
survey question? Just curious...
Deevaa: will you be able to provide December's
review??
Thanks Hedvig for the compliment on my poem. :-D I appreciate it a lot.
Cellie
Twinkle~ Your poems are beautiful. They are rich with passion, and expressed eloquently. You have an amazing talent, chica! Luv, Violet
Du'Doll
~Where did it go~
Sometimes we have dry spells. It doesn't mean that there's anything wrong. Look at how long it's been since I've posted. Trust me, I've had the inspiration to write. I just can't seem to put the words down to match my feelings. Or maybe I don't really know what my feelings are? Don't get discouraged if words fail you. Remember that sometimes actions speak louder than words. Oh, and I'll definitely be off work on the day of your wedding, even if I have to make my bosses close the place down for a day!!
Love ya chica!
Sophia
Stephen - Pulse on the Lips
That gave me goosepimples.
Du'Doll - Where Did It Go
You must have been inside my head. Lately I feel exactly the same!
ahhh....yip, but only if you can send me back what I sent you so I can add the extra paragraph!
*dancing about cause she's just confirmed with Argyle he's coming to spend Christmas in NZ*
Thanks Hedvig and hollymccormick for the comments! ;-)
Best time to write love poetry is when you're in love!
lol.. simple but true.
l8ers,
guy with simple name
violet - you are the sweetest girl ever. i love your poems and have missed them...we should see each other during cmas break...
love ya!
Hedvig~ thank you so much, I appriciate it.
Randy1~ Thank you, honest words at a few are far better than many words of insincerity.
thanks again guys
xoxo
elaina
Something from... nothing is AMAZING - Dark and oh so sad but WOW WEE.
shoulders hunched to protect
this living thing
as it searches for
nothing
forever more
........Oh my golly gee wonder - you are so very cool.
Courtney - title that thing - it is so expressive to NOT give it a fitting header.
Violet...my Beaver in Oregon!!! tonight ...Ta Da...she is back and full of metaphors today! marrow...you make marrow sound romantic!
Blue Denim - Fire Signs is Grrreeaaat!
Stephen, you certainly don't need love to write well, but Pulse on the Lips is a sultry tribute to your special scented one.
BK - they are getting happier and happier. Is he home soon? A lovers synchronicity - oh yes, I love that phrase.
Teej - nobody scares me. I am trapped in a house with three kids for a couple days...too freaky for me right now.
Madi - great incorporation of dee's pic with your words. FAB-ulous.
Ok--there are a few more...but I need to shower!
Bye, from Rhet - the coolest Aunt Jenny any three wild ass kids ever knew.
Sorry Rhet. Nobody was about being in a relationship during a difficult time. You know, he calls and you lie there and listen to the phone ring and have a million thoughts going through your head wondering if you should pick up or not. Or when you call him and there's no answer and you wonder if he's lying there listening to the phone ring thinking it's you...and you just feel like a nobody. You know what I mean? Hope your time of confinement w/ munchkins ends soon!!
Teej
Teej...Oh how I EVER know that feeling! I have hated those nights really wanting to either find closure or to just talk to him and know he really does care. I liked it...I am just a great big scaredy cat! I feel like nobody is around me right now except the muffins. My bro asked me if I wanted him to load his rifle!!! He lives in a somewhat rural area and I don't know a soul in this town!
Oh well, I love them dearly and always have a blast while I am here. I have just never been on full-time duty, that's all.
Thanks for the explaination, though.
Rhetty
~Rhetoric~
Totally didn't realize I left it without a title. Thank you!!!
Courtney
niki - i really liked "a perfect night". It was so sad and longing....i really liked this line:
"So I came home with this longing to call you just to hear you voice"