B.K. - Dawns Yummy Winter Yawn is awesome.
"Pounded by the winds to slumber
Til a tender winters dawn kissed her cheek
And passion blissfully whispered"
and
"And wrapped itself around her
Detailing in waves of bliss
Why it is extraordinary"
wow. fanfriggintastic.
aparajita - lol thanks. i disagree with your judgment but meh to each his own... good to be back, been really busy with a few things and also lost access to the internet for a week or two there. hope everything goes well with you, take it easy.... ciao for now.
Okay, So I'm bored and figured I'd write another quick one. Anybody else wanna fire this up again with me? You know you wanna....
Sharpened stars stab my sleeping sanctuary
saboetguing the scarred safety
thats sustained this surreal scarecrow
through science and scissors
So scratch, scrape;
scorn my screaming secret,
for serenity is shallow and shamed
I am a shadow
shackled in silent silk
singing songs to sinful slumber
So smile slowly
(spirit and spite:
so sickly stale)
I'm rather unfamiliar with the formal rules of writing limericks so if i've bent or broken any please let me know.
Yeah for the tongue twisters....nice work everyone
From: Star of David
Tying a knot
Comes to naught
If the knot is not
A knot with you
From: aparajita
sagaciously
sassy shellie sat sipping sangria
silently scheming sex scenes
seeking sean's secret sensuous side
savoring seductive scenarios
I vote that one hardest to say ha
From: blessed23
and I am a shadow
shackled in silent silk
singing songs to sinful slumber
So smile slowly
Aren't words wonderful to work with.
Star of David; One could only wish they were lucky enough to have written this. Everything dies, but you
i'm just him let me fall and you dropped something I always enjoy your writing, your poems are like finding the last missing puzzle piece.
Hey Marsh: Thanks for your comments on my poem. I enjoy your writing as well.
[2006.02.03.22.21.6767]]
Don't let me leave
just yet
(your skin and kisses
are an anchor
that keep me beside you
Don't believe me
just yet
(you only raise me up like this
because you don't know
who i really am)
Sounds a little like Pablo Neruda
chris; midnight song for janis
no lone star up there
old girl -
a whole world
balanced uneasily atop a horizon in flames -
constellations not yet named
and all the questions you weren't allowed
to ask
but sure as hell know the answers to
now
That one slaps you right in the kisser ha and The Perfect Saturday Night: Basic Instructions This one is a slice of life with textures. More Chris, this is wonderful.
Keep up the great works guys, a great (but short) month started. Geez can you believe it's almost March already?
Oh yeah, ladyinwaiting, ha I would rather got to Italy but no one I know wants to go to Europe right now, so we are looking down under. The problem is you have to go now or wait till till fall and winter. I also am thinking England Ireland Scotland and Wales. You will have to tell us all about Italy too.
bk
Thanks, BK... I'm learning more and more that, when you've found the right person, walking to the 7-11 to buy Slurpees could be the height of romance.
Hairdiva, Aparajita, Blessed23, B.K.,
Thank you all...