Rennie :)
I know that others have felt deeper heart ache that i've felt, however I wish "it" on no one especially YOU...you are so inspiring and your comment definitely gave me hope...not only you, but others keep reminding me that i'm not alone...thanks so much
I J H,
you certainly made my day, no my entire week with your comment! please keep submitting your work--it's always unique plus it's from a man's perspective...you make a difference here...
CS%*
aparjita,
happy birthday to you,
happy birthday to you
happy birthday dear d--eb
happy birthday to you... :)
pam
happy birthday to you,
happy birthday to you,
happy birthday dear wist-ful
happy birthday to you...
CS%*
i'm just him, about all i'll ever be : You always make me smile with your poems and I may just have to bump this one.
bk
kindred_spirit49, about The Enticement: Ooh Just the beginning lines and I know it's an erotic roller coaster ride. I keep trying to write like this and lately it escapes me. Maybe if I just let it come to me first. How do you do it?
bk
chris, about On Yale Mall, After Dark: Have I told you lately that I love the pictures you paint. Have you tried acrylics yet?
bk
wolfscreamer, about Just some "ings": Bewitching!
bk
i'm just him, about never been truer words spoken : Yep it's a word I looked it up...ha
True truer truest adjetives.
bk
try adjective....I hate it when I do that.
bk
chris, about On Yale Mall, After Dark:
Truly a lovely piece. Excellently written, with strong emotions and stellar imagery. Thanks for sharing this! :-)
:D!!! thanks pam!
Kirk hi ,,,
Sent the link to your site to a couple friends who say they still cannot post because they havent recieved the email confirmation back from you. Any suggestions as to why they are having difficulty? Thanks :)
lovewhispers, about Thoughts of Him:
what a beautiful tribute! ...... Rennie
wolfscreamer, about Just some "ings":
put so precisely and beautifully ...... Rennie
chris, about On Yale Mall, After Dark:
I want to read this again...then again, again...and realize that I better comment before I get jerked back into the real world of pup needs feeding and telephone calls...from this slice of life that you've created--well done, well done ...... Rennie
i'm just him, about never been truer words spoken :
yep, so true that it's "truer" here...and thanks for the comment on PARTING SHOTS :)
b.k.~thanks for such an enjoyable day yesterday. As I told you then, and here again, I marvel at your ability to keep writing of the happiness you feel. Bravo! ...... Rennie
kindred_spirit49, about The Enticement:
ah! oh! wow!
Cryingshame(Pam)~thanks so much for the comments. We're back at square one and finally the talking stage ...... Rennie
B.K., about Keep Your Pucker Up:
You are "blessed" in love and being able to express it so well. Also, thanks for being such a kind friend.
aparajita, bp and wistful~Happy Buffdays!!! ...... Rennie
Dear Blakey,,,how could I have missed this..Im so sorry not too respond sooner..Life..why does it have too be so complicated? why dont people.. say what they mean,,and mean what they say? For you and whatever you decide is right,, Good luck,,I have given up. I see no point in having a person in your life that isnt 100% loyal and true.
Its sad,but,no more holding hands,I would fight for this, if, but,,as my submisions move along.. you can see,,there is no hope,,and,,no desire too hang on.
From: blakey
Date: 5 October 2006
no white flag, about stand up: First off, I have to say this must have been written with lots of passion. And though I have never heard your voice, I can definitely detect your tone in it. Secondly, I have been struggling with this work – as in not knowing how to proceed in my own life (obviously, written so well I feel motivated to take some sort of action). I feel as though I am in the same shoes that you are in but I feel inclined to ‘step up’ and take action. I tried to keep the communication lines open for almost a year and a half before I was informed that what was, was and what is, is. From that point, I felt as though my intentions from the past were considered bothersome or simply ignored. So, I just stopped trying, although in my heart, hope still exists. Anyway, this is where my quandary lies: if I attempt to re-establish communication channels again, would pride keep the desired recipient from responding even though there may be something there, or would it just appear as though I have failed to let go and let her move on? Which bring me to two passages in your piece untitled:
“After a while you learn the subtle difference between holding a hand and chaining a soul”
“And you begin to learn that kisses arent contracts and presents arent promises”
My next steps are unsure, but be certain whatever they are, this work will have something to do with it.
rennielorca, about TO-GET-HER:
Awesome details here, I would almost feel sorry for him but nawwwww. ha
We did have fun at the Pow Wow yesterday didn't we. That was such a colorful day and such good company. We can go to the movies when the weather won't permit us to do anything else.
bk
through the pain,the sorrow,, the joys and all i read ,,
I try hard too suppress it,,but,,my sense of humor has gotten me through so much, so..forgive me for posting this,
but,, some of these titles.. crack me up.
Top 25 Country Song Titles
25. Get Your Tongue Outta My Mouth Cause I'm Kissing
You Goodbye
24. Her Teeth Was Stained, But Her Heart Was Pure
23. How Can I Miss You If You Won't Go Away?
22. I Don't Know Whether To Kill Myself Or Go Bowling
21. I Sold A Car To the Guy Who Stole My Girl, But It
Don't Run
So We're Even
20. I Keep Forgettin' I Forgot About You
19. I Liked You Better Before I Knew You So Well
18. I Still Miss You, Baby, But My Aim's Gettin'
Better
17. I Wouldn't Take Her To A Dog Fight, Cause I'm
Afraid She'd
Win
16. I'll Marry You Tomorrow But Let's Honeymoon
Tonight
15. I'm So Miserable Without You, It's Like Having You
Here
14. I've Got tears In My Ears From Lyin' On My Back
and Cryin'
Over You
13. If I Can't Be Number One In Your Life, Then Number
Two On You
12. If I Had Shot You When I Wanted To, I'd Be Out By
Now
11. Mama Get A Hammer (There's A Fly On Papa's Head)
10. My Head Hurts, My Feet Stink, And I Don't Love You
9. My Wife Ran Off With My Best Friend, And I Sure Do
Miss Him
8. Please Bypass This Heart
7. She Got The Ring And I Got The Finger
6. You Done Tore Out My Heart And Stomped That Sucker
Flat
5. You're The Reason Our Kids Are Ugly
4. If The Phone Don't Ring, You'll Know It's Me
3. She's Actin' Single and I'm Drinkin' Double
2. She's Looking Better After Every Beer
And the number one Country and Western song is:
1. I Haven't Gone To Bed With Any Ugly Women, But I've
Sure Woke
Up With A Few