distant moon, about Another Noose: i really like this. nice work.
greysky, about Storm {Eros} .......adult: OMG!!!! i needed a cold shower after this one from the archives. this is quite yummy.
Peccy, about A Father’s Love: peccy, i felt the pain and anguish of this piece so deeply. somedays i am not so certain about this "maturity" thing. the recall of all the stupid things of my youth is oft too much to remember. i had a friend (no, really, i did) that got pregnant at 14. she was completely ostracized by classmates and teachers alike. the 15 yr old guy, i never knew what happened to him... he disappeared into a black hole somewhere. funny how then i never thought of what that must have done to him since i was so close to her suffering.
keep the faith... there are a lot of children begging for a man to be a father to them out there.
tight squeezy hugs to you.
B.K., about The Art of Kissing You: oh sweet goodness! BK... this is also very yummy! i had tons of shivers reading this. thanks for sharing this one.
I'mnobody, about Two Lover’s Plight: welcome to the blender! may you find peace here. you've an awesome first submit!
ps: i personally feel like everybody is a somebody. :)
B.K., about The Truth Runs Through: BK, you are a songstress for certain. this is good stuff. i can almost hear music with it, and have already began humming something of a tune to it. awesome! you can do more of this all day long!
john67ragtop, about Untitled:
Thanks for the smile John and good luck finding the woman of your dreams.
bk
aparajita; Thanks for your comments sweetie pie. My pen is not writing lately so I dug up some oldies that I wrote wayyyy back when rocks were square. ha
How's Texas treating you?
bk
aww thanks bk! love your work by the way!
john